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Anita’s Choice
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It seemed so long ago
But it’s only just a year
I’m so glad everything is alright again




“How long are we a team?” Anita asked.

A year went by and Anita and Victor sat on ‘their place’ at the top of the hill.

“Too long to remember the first time we met.” Victor said with a smile.

“You do remember the first time we met, right?” Anita asked.

“Of course. How could I forget that?” Victor said.

“I don’t know. Maybe Professor Professor did something with your brain.”

“I’m glad he didn’t. It would be disgraceful.” Victor looked at Anita. It was a year ago that I almost lost her, I’m so glad she back again.

“What are you thinking about?” Anita asked.

“Nothing.” Victor said. “Nothing special.”

“Come on, we’re best friends. You can tell me anything.”

Victor sighed “I was thinking about the last time we sat here.”

“You mean…Why?”

“Well, it’s just…I almost lost my best buddy.” Victor said with a smile.

“No, you lost almost your partner.” Anita said. “But I don’t think you were thinking about that. What were you really thinking?”

“About why you so suddenly left.” Victor said. “You could tell me that you didn’t want to marry Alphonse. I would understand it.”

Anita sighed. “It was just…I just couldn’t marry Alphonse. It was too difficult for me.”

“Too difficult to say goodbye?”

“I guess so.” Anita looked at Victor. “If I knew this was going to happen, I would never say yes to Alphonse.”

Victor nodded. “It’s not you don’t love him anymore?” he asked.

“Why do you want to know that?” Anita asked.

“Come on, we’re best friends, you can tell me anything.” Victor smiled.

Anita sighed. “Alright.” she said. “I see Alphonse more as a friend than as a lover. Now I know all of this, I don’t think Alphonse is my true love.”

“Who is it then?” Victor asked teasing.

“I don’t think I already met him.” Anita said. “Maybe I’ll run into him.”

Victor smiled. “Do you remember what Professor Professor said when you got back at the U.Z.Z. base?”

“Yeah, I remember.” Anita said. “I remember it very well.”



“Are you sure you don’t need any sleep?” Victor asked.
He and Anita just came from the hill and they walked trough the blue hallways of the U.Z.Z. base.

“I’m alright.” Anita said.

“Just to be sure.” Victor said. “I don’t want a sleepy partner on her sky-bike.”

“That’s not gonna happen.” Anita said when they walked into the Briefing Room.

“What’s not going to happen?” Professor Professor asked.

“Nothing.” Anita said and she sat in her chair.

“Welcome back, Anita.” Changed Daily said. “I understand if you don’t want to talk about what happened last, so I’m not going to talk about that.”

“Thank you.” Anita said.

“But that doesn’t mean I’m not gonna talk about it. Where were you?” Professor Professor asked.

“If you mean where I slept the last weeks, I went to a hotel just out town.” Anita said. “I wanted to be alone.”

“So you’re not going to marry with Alphonse.” Changed Daily said and Anita shook her head.

“It’s just I don’t love him. I can’t marry a man I don’t love.”

“You look too far” Professor Professor said and he looked to Victor. “Your true love is right in front of you.”




Anita looked at Victor. “Remind me that I have to kill that man.”

Victor laughed. He knew exactly what she was thinking.  “Let him think what he wants to think. It doesn’t hurt anyone.”

“Not yet, but soon he’ll be hurt.”

“Come, we don’t think about that, it gives him only more pleasure.”

“You’re right. It’s our day off today, so…no U.Z.Z. today.” Anita said.

Suddenly, their communicators ringed. They looked to each other.

“Even if the Martians are coming to steal the gravity again, I’m not going to answer that call.” Victor said and Anita nodded.

“We’re going to enjoy our annual-teamwork-day-thing.” Anita smiled

He’s right in front of me, the man I love. It took me six months to figure that out. How long shall it take for him?
Well, at last the last chapter.
I hope you liked the story.
And thanks for all those (sweet and kind) comments.

And still, I don't own The Secret Show
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Photographer
This would make a great episode!! :lol: I wonder if there will be a sequel to this anytime soon? ^^
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know, never really thought of that and I got the feeling that it should end there and like this
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Wasn't this your first story?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The very first
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Then, I think you might want to make a sequal to your first story ever. =D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, who knows. I'm now busy with the Hannah series and a Christmas story
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Oooooo! =3 can't wait to see the Christmas one ^^ and what Hannah story is this one called?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Have no title yet, actually... I'm horrible with titles at the beginning of a story
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Darkfallenangel21 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
Nice story, well-written and intresting.


Though the end was a bit.... too open for my liking. But hey :P That's got nothing to do with you =P
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Did you know I even had to think really, really, really hard when I saw the title. Then I remembered that it was my first story that I wrote.
The plot might be nice, but the writing itself... horrible! I don't even dare to read it over these days. ^^;
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Darkfallenangel21 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
Hahahaha,yeah, I can imagine... :P


Well, I started with your oldest work non purpuse, this way I can see your improvements when I read the rest.
But honsetsly, there are a LOT of people who can't write that well even after years of their so called practise...

Those people don't post it on internet though, at least not the ones I know =P Luckily XD

But anyway, for a first time it's not bad at all!

The descriptions could be a bit longer a bit more... descriptive XD
The story could have been longer but with the same plot so things seem less rushed and people can feel the emotions of the charakters better.

But none of that was really missing, it could have been just a little more, but it doesn't really need to.

So all with all I'm more ashamed with my first writings because they're ...*beep*... compared to yours.


XD =P


ohw and btw, the spelling, grammer, connecting words and stuff. They're not bad at all.

So all with all, don't be ashamed of it, for a first work its better than mine :D =P waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay...........better........


XD
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I know what your talking about. I've seen some stories of writers I've known for years, but they never improve their work.
(and it helps sometimes when you say that your a non-native English speaker :D)
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Darkfallenangel21 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
Haha yes I know, and yes it does XD

:P

I said that with my first story as well XD
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes I get the reaction that they didn't even noticed that I am from Holland. I always take that as a compliment. :)
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Darkfallenangel21 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009
You should :D
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I do =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
I laughed at the ending of your fiction. It does seem like Victor would never answer a call on his day off. XD You did such a good job depicting their relationship it just warms my heart to want to read this all over again.
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*cries* That's so beautiful
Me: *hugs Victor*
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littlepuppyeyes Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
Bravo! Bravo! *crowd cheering and clapping*
Shaka: Amazing
Veronica: Awesome
Me: Best thing ever!
Samatha: Great!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D thank you
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aushpluva Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
Amazing work!! I really hope that you write a sequel in the future.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm thinking about writing an other story of The Secret Show, so maybe, who knows
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aushpluva Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
I hope so
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