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Anita’s Choice
Chapter 1


There she was, standing outside the room.
She didn’t know how she had to tell it to the others.
No one knew about this, except ‘he’.




Anita took a deep breath and walked into the Briefing Room.

“Ha, Anita, we were waiting for you.” Changed Daily said.

“I’m sorry I’m so late.” Anita said. “But I had to stop somewhere.”

Changed Daily nodded. “As you all know, for reasons of security, my name is Changed Daily. Today you may call me...” the communicator bleeped and Changed Daily took it out his pocket. “Oh…Tinkle Tiny Toe.”

Professor Professor, Anita and Victor chuckled.

“There is something I must tell you, guys.” Anita said suddenly.

“What?” Professor Professor and Victor asked at the same time.

Anita looked to her hands. “It’s really important.” she said.

Tinkle Tiny Toe looked at her. “What is so important?” he asked.

“I’m gonna get married.” Anita said quickly.

“You’re gonna…what!?” Victor said in disbelief.

“I’m gonna get married.” Anita said again, this time slower.

“Congratulations.” Professor Professor said. “So…who’s the lucky one?”

Oh please, don’t let her say Alphonse Victor thought.

“Alphonse asked me to marry him.” Anita said.

“I’m sure that you two will be happy together.” Tinkle Tiny Toe said.

“And when is this happy day?” Professor Professor asked.

“Our wedding day is on the 12th of December.” Anita said.

“That’s about six months.” Victor said.

Anita nodded. “It’s not that soon.” she said with a smile to Victor. “It gives me time to say goodbye to you.”

Tinkle Tiny Toe looked worried to Anita. “What do you mean?”  he asked. “Are you going to leave U.Z.Z.?”

“I’m not sure, but…” Anita sighed. “Maybe I want a family. Kids, I mean. And with a job here at U.Z.Z…Well, it’ll be too dangerous for me.”

Tinkle Tiny Toe and Professor Professor looked to each other.

“You can do the back-up, if you like.” sounded behind Tinkle Tiny Toe. “We are sometimes a few persons short, so you can help us then.” Special Agent Ray said.

“I’ll think about that.” Anita said with a smile.

“Shall we go work now?” Professor Professor asked and the rest nodded.




“So, how did he ask you?” Agent Kowalski asked to Anita.

It was lunchtime and every agent who worked that day on U.Z.Z., was standing around Anita’s lunch table.

Anita gave them a big smile. “I was ready to go to sleep, when I heard a violin playing. So I went to look outside and I saw Alphonse. When he saw me, he put his violin away and walked to me.”

“Go on, go further.” some of the agents asked.

Anita smiled. “Well, as I said, Alphonse walked to me. Then he went down on one knee and he asked me to marry him. That’s all.”

“Come on, don’t say that was all.” Special Agent Ray said, but Anita nodded.

“Yeah, that was all.” Anita said.

In meantime, Victor sat next to Professor Professor at the lunch table.

“So, why don’t you listen to Anita’s story?” Professor Professor asked.

“Because I heard the story a few times before.” Victor said. “This is the tenth time she talks about this.”

Professor Professor chuckled. “I guess somebody is jealous.” he said.

“Who, me? No, I’m…I’m not jealous.” Victor said.

“You should be happy for her.” Special Agent Ray said when he walks by.

“I am, really, I am happy for her.” Victor said. He looks to Anita, who was shining of happiness. But I don’t want to loose her that way
I got inspired by one of SangoWings333's drawings: TSS Panic Stricken (Did I spell it right?)
So I wrote a fanfic about The Secret Show.

This is my first time that I write a fanfic about The Secret Show and at DeviantArt, so please, be kind to me.

Before I forget, I don't own anything. Not The Secret Show, not Anita Knight, Victor Volt, Changed Daily, Professor Professor, Special Agent Ray, Agent Kowalski and not Alphonse.

Let me know what you think of the story.
Eszies-Eszie
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ImperialHope Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anita & Alphonse!? *dramatic music plays*
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TwilightandAnimefan Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, this is so sweet!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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TwilightandAnimefan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Np :3
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
I love it. The first time I read this I almost started crying! (almost, because I had been laughing really hard before I read it!)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it=D
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
I do I do Ido!!!!!
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I noticed that =D =D
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
:D Ur cool! just thought I'd say that...
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanx, =D
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edgarellen1fan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
Dont mention it! ;)
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:giggle:
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww :( :(
OMFG my poor Victor <:0(
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2008
For the first time I actually want to cry. I mean I know the subject's been broached before, but I never imagined...I can't contain myself on how much I can't wait for chapter two. But this has the makings of a great story. =D I can see this all in my head as you wrote it and it's just amazing.

Awesome work.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, very very much.
I'm glad you'd like it. It means a lot to me.
Chapter two is now online, so have fun with it.
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