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industrial skyline
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:iconmealoil:
let me start with this is the first critique i have written - so here it goes:
i love the reflection on the bottom center and on the water below
good balance between shadow in the foreground and the very bright sunset, you maintained good detail in the foreground, with out distraction from the main subject - the sunset
your vision is great - just enough detail in the pipe and valve to let the view know it is industrial
color balance is also well done, it feel warm while giving the sense that this is fleeting, the industrial pipe feel ridges, immovable as if it will be there forever.
as i study this photo more, i see more and more details - great technique - you main subject is framed well, it quickly catches and focues the viewers attention, but allow for deeper reflection and thought into the photo as it is studied in detail
the type of picture you that draws you in

i would like to have seen what this would look like had you zoomed out / pulled back a little and framed the pipe with sunlight.
What do you think?
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:icondocmallard:
DocMallard Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Awesome work!

-Doc
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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MusicalLemon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful composition!
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much ..
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:iconknottymorningwood:
KnottyMorningWood Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Wow!
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you ..
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:iconknottymorningwood:
KnottyMorningWood Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Why certainly!
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martutuss Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist
Awesome shot! Very nice contrast!
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much ,..
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:iconmartutuss:
martutuss Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Welcome!
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:iconfunkycake:
FunkyCake Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist
this is epic!
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you much appreciated
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:iconfunkycake:
FunkyCake Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist
:DI'm glad
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PhotoshopGirl29 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That is awesome!
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much,much appreciated .
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:iconphotoshopgirl29:
PhotoshopGirl29 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You are welcome, I also have a photography page on FB, hope you will check the page out and like it. Here is the link: www.facebook.com/pages/Photogr…
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:iconmealoil:
mealoil Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Nice
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:iconshioroi:
Shioroi Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Professional Artist
this one's so cyber-punk :)
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cactusmumkate Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful shot, I like the colors very much and the dark parts..the shadows :clap:
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much .
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:iconcactusmumkate:
cactusmumkate Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you´re welcome :D
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cindy1701d Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Very cool shot, I love the coloring of it. :)
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much ...
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cindy1701d Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Your most welcome.
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Lothrian Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Woahh!! That is such a wonderful picture, such an incredible, unique composition. Very, very lovely :)
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:iconestruda:
Estruda Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much ..
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