Since it's the end of the chapter, I gotta say, I'm loving this so far! I've always been fascinated by the topic of "what is a soul" and "how can something gain a soul". I think this story does cover the topic pretty nicely. And boy, do I just love Silverlay. Her character is a very interesting concept! Maybe not all too original, but very interesting nonetheless. I love your stories, ES. Keep up the good work! ❤️
Keep up the good work! It reads nicely, the story is really good (with no apparant big plot-holes, which I like) and original. Can't wait for the next chapter. A lot of my friends are reading this at well, you have more fans than you think!