ES: Seeds of Darkness 057
By EStories
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Kinda funny looking back, knowing where things go between these two.
Your safe not save
Yeah, I saw that too
Panel 18 Should be "safe" not "save." EDIT: Just realized that many people before me have already spotted and commented on it. Please, disregard this comment."
Mistake!
You'll be *save* now
Panel 18
You'll be *save* now
Panel 18
safe. not save.
Spelling error in panel 18 It should be "You're safe now" not "you're save now" FYI I love this story, the character of Silverlay and the drama this character goes thru. TWO HOOVES UP
"You're save now and so are we"??? You mean "You're SAFE now and so are we"?
Looks like you are trying to ship these two... Dang it!
grammar mistake says save and is supposed to say safe
I'd agree with Ina on that.
"Your save now and thanks to you so are we!"
It should be "safe".
"Your save now and thanks to you so are we!"
It should be "safe".
Head up, sugercube. You're save now and thanks to you so are we!It should be: "Head up, sugercube. You're safe now and thanks to you so are we!"
Sugarcube*
You're a silly pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into gates and
knocking over fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
All day long you trot around,
looking at the Apples on the trees,
dreaming all your Pony dreams,
licking lips so greedily.
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into posts and
falling into trenches,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Watching all the Rosy Apples
Oops, there goes another fence.
Are you coming, are you going?
Why don't you use your Horse Sense?
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into posts and
knocking over fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Applejack!
Applejack!
Soon the winds will blow a whistle,
knocking Apples to the ground.
Call for Bow-Ties, she will help you
spread her ribbons on the ground.
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Falling over logs and
bumping into fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into gates and
knocking over fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
All day long you trot around,
looking at the Apples on the trees,
dreaming all your Pony dreams,
licking lips so greedily.
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into posts and
falling into trenches,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Watching all the Rosy Apples
Oops, there goes another fence.
Are you coming, are you going?
Why don't you use your Horse Sense?
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Bumping into posts and
knocking over fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Applejack!
Applejack!
Soon the winds will blow a whistle,
knocking Apples to the ground.
Call for Bow-Ties, she will help you
spread her ribbons on the ground.
Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!
Falling over logs and
bumping into fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
You said save now. It should be safe now. : )
Your "save now" should be "safe now"
you're "Save" now
should be safe.
should be safe.
Panel 18, line three. You said "save" but it should be "safe"
Darn it, I'm soooooo behind. Nvm
p.s English isn't my native language either.
p.s English isn't my native language either.
On the third panel from the bottom it says " You're save now" it should say "You're safe now" I guess it's just a typing error.
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