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ES: Seeds of Darkness 057

By EStories
FIRSTPRE - NEXT

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AlternateHistory's avatar
Kinda funny looking back, knowing where things go between these two.
KillraptorRex's avatar
Your safe not save
FormSans's avatar
Yeah, I saw that too
Agamemnon69's avatar
Panel 18 Should be "safe" not "save."  EDIT: Just realized that many people before me have already spotted and commented on it. Please, disregard this comment."
nightshadowmlp's avatar
Mistake!

You'll be *save* now

Panel 18
Saiyanstrong's avatar
safe.  not save.
bugssonicx's avatar
Spelling error in panel 18 It should be "You're safe now" not "you're save now" FYI I love this story, the character of Silverlay and the drama this character goes thru. TWO HOOVES UP
EndenDragon's avatar
"You're save now and so are we"??? You mean "You're SAFE now and so are we"?
FanficLoverArtMaster's avatar
Looks like you are trying to ship these two... Dang it!
its supposed to be "safe" not "save"
mlpslightningbolts's avatar
grammar mistake says save and is supposed to say safe
I know you've heard this before but, 
"Safe" not "Save" there sorry
SpeedBumpV-Drop's avatar
I'd agree with Ina on that.

"Your save now and thanks to you so are we!"

It should be "safe".
HiyoriNoHiyo's avatar
Head up, sugercube. You're save now and thanks to you so are we!
It should be: "Head up, sugercube. You're safe now and thanks to you so are we!"
xanman12321's avatar
LadySolonna's avatar
You're a silly pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!

Bumping into gates and
knocking over fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!

All day long you trot around,
looking at the Apples on the trees,
dreaming all your Pony dreams,
licking lips so greedily.

Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!

Bumping into posts and
falling into trenches,
who is?
You is, Applejack!

Watching all the Rosy Apples
Oops, there goes another fence.
Are you coming, are you going?
Why don't you use your Horse Sense?

Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!

Bumping into posts and
knocking over fences,
who is?  
You is, Applejack!

Applejack!

Applejack!

Soon the winds will blow a whistle,
knocking Apples to the ground.
Call for Bow-Ties, she will help you
spread her ribbons on the ground.

Who's a silly Pony?
You're a silly Pony!
Who is?
You is, Applejack!

Falling over logs and
bumping into fences,
who is?
You is, Applejack!
Ari-kitten's avatar
You said save now. It should be safe now. : )
FoxyDivaArtist's avatar
Your "save now" should be "safe now"
CatsMusicGamingArt's avatar
you're "Save" now
should be safe.
Roselinea's avatar
Panel 18, line three. You said "save" but it should be "safe"
Frame 18: "Head up, sugarcube.  You're save now and thanks to you so are we!"
Should be "Head up, sugarcube.  You're safe now and thanks to you so are we!"
littleshadowsong14's avatar
Darn it, I'm soooooo behind.  Nvm
p.s English isn't my native language either.
littleshadowsong14's avatar
On the third panel from the bottom it says " You're save now" it should say "You're safe now" I guess it's just a typing error.  
i love that silverlay was wiring aj"s at
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