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ForestTrails482's avatar

*after Fluttershy hugs Discord*

Discord: “Y’ouch!!!” 😵

Fluttershy: “Oh my. I am so sorry!” 😧

In summary, you almost died and you wrecked a patch of the Everfree on an adrenaline-fueled rampage.
Flexico's avatar
I wasn't expecting the ship to be canon, but please tell me Alice and Discord at least keep in contact!
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KrytenMarkGen-0's avatar
My heart literally can't handle how much these two care about each other... Come on, Mark, man up already! ^^; lol
DawnsyBebo's avatar
What?? About??? Alice??????
LSDInkvizitor's avatar
Can you list canon ships in this story? :P
wildhawk441's avatar
Ok, I legit thought that Alice was walking in there in panel 2!

You have us hooked! Fluttershy checking up on Discord, now what about Alice? 233 showed us that she was safe (and comforting Discord).

Please, let Fluttershy have some kind reveal up her hoof!
samuraivalerie's avatar
"Wait, I'm injured!"
The-PurplePony's avatar
Alice come out 
don't pout 
don't make me shout 
Alice come out

cadancefayle's avatar
Wait..If Alice isn't here...The title "Goodbye"..........

Kaori Freaking Out Icon THEY CAN'T END IT HERE!! ALICE HAS TO LIVEEE!!!!!!

They can't kill a main character right?.. Sweating a little... 
The-PurplePony's avatar
Oh but they can AND THEY MIGHT 😱
cadancefayle's avatar
Rarity (cry) plz NO NO NO NO NOOOO!!!!!!
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awsomenick3's avatar
Ahh what a nice chapter, I wonder wha-
*Chapter name: Goodbye*
The-PurplePony's avatar
They probably will
Eclipse-mythbuster's avatar
Poor Alice. Him not remembering what happened with her
Eclipse-mythbuster's avatar


Have you seen the MLP movie yet? 
I have a review on my channel 
The-PurplePony's avatar
Eclipse-mythbuster's avatar
My vid or the movie?
cause here’s the vid…
The-PurplePony's avatar
I've seen the film 

your right with every word 

I mean The Storm King was my most anticipated character and man did he SUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!
Eclipse-mythbuster's avatar
Captain Cleo was mine. (Because she’s played by Gamora’s actor Zoe Salanda) and so was Tempest. Wasn’t disappointed with them aside from Tempest’s weak motivation for being evil.

The Storm king was boring 
The-PurplePony's avatar
Yes yes yes and yes 

I think Ronan from the first GOTG was much better than Storm King 

yeah Tempest was badass but her motivation needed some tweaking 

although it wasn't really weak though I mean her friends lost the ball in the urea minor cave she goes in their fights it loses her horn and receives a scar and her friends abandoned her 

poor Tempest poor poor Tempest 

and hey hey did you know the Storm King was played by this guy:…
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