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DawnfrostFlitter's avatar
DawnfrostFlitterHobbyist Writer
Last panel had a mistake:
It should say:
"I didn't hear him make any jokes about you."
liangzhixiaoemo's avatar
"He makes jokes about everypony he likes."

Discord always makes jokes about Celestia... ;)
EStories's avatar
EStoriesHobbyist Digital Artist
I don't mind DisLestia ;D
piefaces1234's avatar
piefaces1234Hobbyist General Artist
Her blush though
Saiyanstrong's avatar
SaiyanstrongHobbyist General Artist
I ship it even harder right now.
ilvbrownies's avatar
ilvbrowniesHobbyist Traditional Artist
umm... not to sound nitpicky but the last panel would read better as "I didn't hear him make jokes about you."
CandyCrane88's avatar
CandyCrane88Student General Artist
*megalovania intensifies*
Catbeastaisha's avatar
"I didn't hear him make jokes about you."
Lyokoheros's avatar
LyokoherosHobbyist Writer
Because he more than just like her, Alice, isn't that obvious?;)
FarrenGrimwarden's avatar
FarrenGrimwardenHobbyist Artisan Crafter
hear him. not hear he
Phaedrolous's avatar
PhaedrolousStudent General Artist
Why is fluttershy holding her neck at a distance?
Hug the pony, Flutters!
AZREAL258's avatar
This comic is great but in the last panel it should be him not he.
NinjaoftheCrackerBox's avatar
"I didn't hear him make jokes about you." (last panel correction)
Also, the one above that... Shouldn't it be for who you are, not, what you are? What you are sounds like Discord's being intentionlly shallow.
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Th3BlueRose Digital Artist
In the panel where Fluttershy says "You're a nice pony. Who had just a bad time", the wording (to me anyways) sounds weird. Maybe something like "You're a nice pony. Who just had a bad time." or "Who had a bad time"
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JadePawClipHobbyist Traditional Artist
Bad Time Tim alert Sans Trombone icon 
Th3BlueRose's avatar
Th3BlueRose Digital Artist
Someone wants to have a bad time :P
JadePawClip's avatar
JadePawClipHobbyist Traditional Artist
YeeEEEEH
Somerandomg5y's avatar
I hear that she got that dark version of herself from the average YouTube comments section
vsbloom's avatar
vsbloomHobbyist General Artist
The final panel should say:
I didn't hear him make jokes about you.
LibbytheKautz's avatar
LibbytheKautzHobbyist General Artist
Amazing art!  It looks just like the show!
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EarthyRainbowkittyHobbyist Digital Artist
SHIPPING!!
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MultipleFandomLoverHobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, so sweet Fluttershy! X3 This story is awesome.
Thunderdrakon's avatar
Your story is awesome! Just the last line, Alice should say I didn't hear HIM instead of I didn't hear HE. Awesome story regardless!
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