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Seifuku Helena

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There were so many cute sailor schoolgirl uniforms at Otakon 2009, I just had to draw one.



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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Uh-oh, digital! I don't really understand digital. ^_^`

That is indeed an adorable outfit. The skin and hair are well-done, and the shading on the clothes is as well. Nicely done hands. I get the feeling that the arms are a little long compared with the legs, but I am not familiar enough with child anatomy to say definitely.
A deeper shadow under her feet would place her more solidly in the setting. I have nothing against using a photo for a background, but if they are going to interact, then they have to be well integrated.
Her eye on the right side needs to be more foreshortened.