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A Spaceship in twilight rev5

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Edit: ok 3 is a charm, i saw another ugly layer issue, man what it is with layers and me submitting something...

- Revision 4 - [link]
- Revision 5 - You are looking at it
- Revision 6 (Scrap/Desat) - [link]

After some feedback from previous submission: Rev 4 ( [link] ) here is a more blueish version - No Desaturation this time.. not sure i like this version more ;)

I didn't exactly want to make duplicates here so i applied some different concept of editing it -

comments and criticism welcome

Changelog
- New Planet with Nightlights
- Nebula made Nebulaish
- Instead of sharper the ship is now partially covered by smoke and has drastic shadow (ie. Space is black, except where it isn't)
- Engine made less drastic, but still drastic ;p

Well as i said, please comment which version you like more , i am partially tending to favor the previous revision, even though that has many flaws - technically i could merge the 2 versions more or less together ie, have multi colored stars in rev 4.. but i think both versions should stay unique... because they are in a sense different concepts...

Please understand that even though i call it Revision 5 that does not mean revision 4 is older or worse, i just make different version to get some feedback on which style is better/worse - i haven't exactly got much of a clue about spaceship scenes.. in space

Edit: I linked to a scrap version with "yet-another" different style .. ah well ;P
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acierghy's avatar
 in this picture you can see the movement, although it static +fav
fantastic, but im not a huge fan of all the exposed bars and tubes, makes it look a bit......sloppy
CaptainHart's avatar
I would love to think there's some alien spacecraft travelling through space. Unaware of us insignificant humans..
johnnynice's avatar
Awesome! May I use this one for a cd cover for an electronic track?
shanesemler's avatar
Bad ass! The bars on the top and bottom are unnecessary though. :)
TranquilRuins's avatar
Cools, love those engine trails
murderen's avatar
Would you mind if I could use this for a custom Yu-gi-oh! card? Credit will be given to you for the art and the card will not be used for my own personal profit.
eRe4s3r's avatar
You can use it as long as its non-profit ;)
murderen's avatar
Its non-profit of course, cuz if it was i'd be rich DX
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SilentArtists's avatar
I am currently working on a slideshow/video and it will contain many different pictures. Now i have found some images on your site more specific here: that I found very nice and fiting to the content of my video. Now I kindly ask if i may make use of this particular picture in the aforementioned video. It will be published onto youtube. A If my request is denied I will not make use of the picture. I do just wish to use it in the video not print it but it will be in a non commercial way. In credits and description I will make credit to your site and you if you wish.
SilentArtists's avatar
Nevermind this post it was accidental
notrace's avatar
wow... thats... beautiful!
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ZuluSplitter's avatar
ja, gefällt mir sehr :-)
eRe4s3r's avatar
Danke ;) Hoffentlich werd ich mal demnächst meine Grippe los dann kommt auch noch was besseres als das da oben ;)

Aber mit Grippe machts irgendwie keinen Spaß ;/
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eRe4s3r's avatar
Thanks ^^ But they ARE from nasa ;P Nothing but world class from them ^^
1st - nice to see a scene made with this craft, GREAT job :) (got on my desktop)
Now some things... (most of them are purely based on taste so do NOT take them seriously into account :) )
1st - the rotation of the ship towards the camera - perhaps the upper part could be rotated so as to reflect the sun(specular)? Not only because of this, it just doesn't seem right to me this way... I strongly suppose it's just me here though...
Next about the nebulae - still looks kinda... weird... I guess the depth perception isn't there or something like that, I'm not sure...
About the engine effects - they are fine as they are :)
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