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MERRY CHRISTMAS AGAIN!!

It's going to be long, sorry. T.T

I started to notice some fans coming in here expecting this comic to be a full out Naruhina and Sasusaku story and I thought I should mention what this fan comic is truly about. I do apologies I didn't mention this before...actually I didn't think people would read it. X.x

This fan comic is all about open minded, learning from each other, twist and turns and sharing each other. I don't do narrow, one way street. That means, no, it isn't just Naruhina or Sasusaku, it's for every ones! Narusaku, Sasunaru, Sasukarin, Narusai Kibahina, etc. That list isn't there to collect dust. It's there, because they will happen within the story.

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Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin, Kibahina--------,SasuNaru,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.)

You see, it's like a race tack. I'm the driver, you guys are the car. Where I take you is the plot of the story, but each turn has a pole. Those poles represent a couple, that street is going to have traps and jumps for that couple to go through. Once that couple is finish, next pole comes again for that couple. Until we get to the finishing line. The car clones itself represent that couple in the race. One that makes it back will be that couple. I'll take you on another track.

Once the story of that couple is finished. They'll be strike out. Example:

Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin, Kibahina--------,SasuNaru,-------. </i> Like this.

Once those couples strike out. They're finish for now until the end of Naruto Period. Readers can vote which Naruto or Sasuke ends up with in Naruto Menstruation. There is 3 ending to this. Two normal endings where Naruto doesn't change back (will have a different title Naruto: Feminine or something), and one he does. With an extra bonce to all couplings on this list. There will be extra short endings in case something stupid-funny jumps in my head.

But beware. I will be asking the voters what they learn or like or critiquing about this comic? Why? just in case one of the fans bring friends into it to the vote and haven't even read the comic. That is unfair to me. So, I will be asking personal fan comic question about it. I'm sadistic that way.

If you aren't up for sharing Naruto or Sasuke to anyone, or your not curious why people enjoy these couples. Then this isn't a comic for you. When I first made this fan comic. I wanted to learn how to do comics, upgrade my style, make femnaruto who she is, and I wanted to know why shipper like these couples. I want to learn why people like these couples. I am curious about you the readers and shippers. I want to see how far you guys go for your coupling, or just simply shut down because one tiny moment in the comic. Yes, not only am I learning about comics, I want to learn from my readers as well, because shipping is starting to become a huge big deal in the entertainment world. It's becoming blood thirsty. After seeing the battle of Naruto, Harry Potter, Avatar and LOK shipper against each other. It's something I wanted to add into my knowledge for my future reference for my own comics. If you guys didn't notice. I add fandom sayings (Like Karin her thoughts about Hinata and Naruto. Or The two women talking gossping behind Naruto's back, or Kiba his thoughts coming from. Yaoi being Naruto fanboy) Are all from the fandom thoughts.  *shrugs* I thought we can explore those thoughts and for characters to over come.

Now, I am not going to place ALL (and crack) Shipping characters in this comic, because I'll be here writing this comic forever. I don't want to write this comic forever. X.x( AS MUCH AS I WANT TO SEE WHAT IT'S LIKE FOR SASUHINA COUPLE BE!! *cries* Oh man, I want to see how that coupling works!) I went down to the ones (at the time) was more popular in the shipping. I pick these couples because their reasonable and made sense (in my young self mind) to work with into the plot story. This isn't battle of the Ninja's, it's battle within themselves. As Naruto is already learning about himself in the comic, he's trying to make everyone happy, but can he really? Can he make others happy or make things worse in the time of peace? Sakura, Hinata, Sasuke and Karin are ALL going to learn something about themselves. If you aren't up to see character growth, *shrugs* again, this comic isn't for you.

So yup, ask questions if I forgot anything. I can't remember what else I need to place here. I just hope you guys understand that this comic is a roller coaster not a parking lot.

P.s You know why I never mention my fav coupling? Because as soon as you guys know that part of me, some of you will automatically think this fancomic will become it. I hate that, that is so very narrow minded. I want you guys to enjoy what I write, not automatically think this is my fav coupling fan comic. If you really want to know my top pairing....Here: Storywriting-chan and Plotimportantandneedtolearnhowtowrite-kun couple. That's all you guys need to know.

I hope it didn't wasn't sound harsh...T.T
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noverlover12 Featured By Owner May 21, 2016
I love this
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Where do we vote?
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NarutoTrash Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
How did you manage to make Kibas older design look attractive, wow
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SolStrike19 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 12, 2015
I enjoy the comic as a whole and can see various couples. {Even if I see a Shino and Hinata couple myself... ] I don't judge how others see what couples should happen or think who is with who. I look forward o seeing how it all folds out.
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nightflowersnfan Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aw, I like the cut of your jib, Enock! Keep up the good work, 'kay?
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MattX125 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Hey Naruko look behind you!
Look whose getting too close to your girl!  :)
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supahjewelz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is brillant and I can't wait! I'm so glad your doing this!
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AllHailMattWilson Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
As long as this story doesnt end in a giant mandatory-complete-attendance village orgy, then im cool with whatever you do (then again, maybe the aforementioned isnt too bad either.. but only as an alternative omake-esque ending)
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Enock Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
LOL, don't worry AllHail, It isn't going to be an orgy. These comics don't have sex in them. Actually, this short comic I am doing will give people an idea what the ending is hinting at.
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AllHailMattWilson Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
Sounds interesting :lick:

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makmix2 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I have my pairings and if they are fulfilled I'll nod in happiness and if denied then its whatever to me.

Yet some people that decides that pairing is love and is life and does some real crazy shtuff....  I dunno bout the fan masses now a days, I know that extremists go absolutely mental on their pairing.
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Animaid101 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 2, 2015
Thank you for your honest words, dear! I loved all of them and I'll support you with everything as far as I'm able to. :heart:
I totally agree, telling your favorite pairing would raise false expectations or later resentments towards you. But I really hope you'll satisfy our curiosity about your OTP once the comic's finished (in all alternatives). But it's also ok. if you don't. :)

Awesome drawing too, by the way. I love how you drew KibaHina in the back. They make a really cute couple. :love:
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Heads-up-Display Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
That's humans for you always like to have it there way so they push it on others, Even I sometime do it but very rare its human nature for ya.

But anyway I enjoy your story loving the twist and funny fillers so I can not wait to see what happens next


PS this reminds me as if its a fanfiction
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gekkodimoria Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Merry Christmas
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Eye-of-the-goddess Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I like that fact that you are a more open-minded person then most its rare in this fandom, but I don't really understand why you have to cut out all crack ships, I mean I get that there are a lot that don't make sense but their some that do and fans have shown a logical reason for them to come together. And I get it you, might already have a story in mind and don't feel like switching the plot but it would be more refreshing to see pairings like sasuhina, kibaino, leesaku or even saikarin. btw this isn't meant to be seen as hateful or anything just wanted to bring my opinion up :)
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Trust me, I would've love to do all the fandom in this comic. I want everyone to see their ships. I would've love to see how Sasuhina worked and I always loved LeeSakura. I never came cross Kibaino and Saikarin before, but that would've been so much fun to see! Especially SaiKarin, funny thoughts come in mind! XD As much as I really would like to do them, I can't figure out ways to shoe them together in this story without having to do side stories away from the plot. And I really don't want to make this comic any longer than it already has. My time with this fan comic is coming to a near close and I really want to move on towards my own original comic.

But, what I can do for you guys for crack pairings is; See the last empty space in the Couple List beside Sasunaru? That is meant for a crack pairing. I am still debating in my mind on who's going to be the crack pairing, but if you guys want. I can make another vote just for that one crack pairings. Whatever comes up in the pairing, I'll see what I can do that can fit towards either in the Naruto Menopause or as an extra ending. I'm very sorry I can't do more for you guys on crack pairings. TT.TT That's all I can do. Y.Y
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Eye-of-the-goddess Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yea that makes sense, it would be kinda hard keeping track of the story since you already got an ending in mind, I completely understand. Plus you wanna make room for your original stories which is also understandable, and trust me if your going to do a comic for the crack shippers that's more then enough for us.....I personally would love to see your perspective on these pairings, sense your pretty realistic with your interpretation of them. btw thanks for taking my comment into consideration, its much appreciated :D
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troth5 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
First of all, awesome picture! Also, you reasoning sounds very fair to me, and I honestly like all of it, even with the few pairings that I may not like. The plot is interesting, and even if the comic ends up with it not *coughSasuNarucough* I will love it still and continue to read it no matter how it turns out, because it is really your decision and I like your thinking, on all the pairings and how it works. Its also more realistic if the story switches around and doesn't end with the pairing it started with, or in the end with all the craziness and other coupling things that may happen, that it does end up with the pairing it started with. 

....I hope that makes sense. lol
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Elldo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
<3 I don't mind seeing different couples, I like seeing the different interactions and how they grow. I'm curious to see why Sasuke suddenly decided to date Sakura =^o^=
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
You just made me like this comic even more.

Thank you for working on this long as project! I'm looking forwards to the rest! (Although I must admit I get quite confused when the OCs turn up)

I hope you had a relaxing or exciting Christmas, and a great year!
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awww, thank you ~:heart:

The OC's have came into the comic before in these pages Silences_27 . The ones that are right now in the pages, they are looking for something.

Same to you! Happy New year!~:cake:
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
Ah its just that they appeared too long ago for my memory to follow^^;

:)
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naruhinafever Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
Love it
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KingofHistory Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
im glad you have an open mind too. I'm honestly fine with any character paring, and i love the story and art work its amazing. Also Merry Christmas. 
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No-face-required Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Student General Artist
So much unresolved sexual tension... Heh, I can just imagine a joke ending that goes like: And then they all had sex, The End!
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sugar123321 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you count your own opinion into the vote as well!
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Sidewinderstriker Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally have no favorite paring, I just love the premise of your comic. (Actually in all truth, I like your comic better than I do the canon comic.) It may be a bit slow, but I love it all the same. I just wish you had more time to work on it.
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ChaosOmega88 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
TO ALL Y'ALL HATERS OUT THERE IF YOU COMMENT ABOUT "BLAHBLAHBLAH YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS COUPLE BLAHBLAH AND THIS ONE" GTFO HERE! THIS IS ENOCK'S STORY ITS UP TO HER TO DECIDE.(sorry but I have an uncontrollable anger towards couple haters)
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JuPMod Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
I understand perfectly. Some fans just will not get that fan writers write their stories as they want, not what other fans want. I hate it when some hardcore shippers keep saying they hope their pairings will happen in a story, yet when it does not happen, they have a sissy-fit  Seems they do not care for other fans' rights to write/draw what they like. (sigh) :disbelief:

Anyway, I like what you're doing with the story, my friend. The twists and turns keep a story interesting, not to mention the emotional drama as well. It does get dull if things stay the same for so long. 

Anyway, Merry Christmas! :hug:
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
Quite good
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Wolfpackersson09 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
It's a very good picture with them happy, and yes I agree that it's stupid to create assumptions that a story would be a particular pairing because  of a favored pairing.
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ProfessM Featured By Owner Edited Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
While I hate Hinata and Naruto as a couple myself, I want people to write the stories they want. My couples are Hinata and Shino and Sakura with Lee, I don't pair Sasuke and Naruto with anyone cause non of my stories/roleplays have them, few have Sakura. You just keep making your story and have a merry x-mas!
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Enock Featured By Owner Edited Dec 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I actually really wanted LeeSakura into this story. Like so badly! I just don't know how to place them into the story. Uge! I actually don't mind HinataXShino, I never knew there were fans to them. You and SolStrike are the only ones fans I know that like Shinohina together. I do apologies I couldn't place your fav couple in. Merry Christmas to you too!
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ProfessM Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey like I said your story. You write what you want to and feels right to you. If I'm reading your comic means you have other things sides pairings I enjoy.....mostly Naruto and Sasuke suffering. They are actually why I stopped reading the manga ages ago and now just read fan stuff. The best thing about Naruto is the fan created stuff like your story. And yeah Lee and Sakura are hard to shoe in together. No I know a few stories of Hinata and Shino but yeah seems to just be me and Sol. Oh and have a happy new you too!
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Mystic-Wolf-Of-Snow Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sasunaru is my fave couple, i honestly cant wait it see it happen in this story. Though to be honest i dont remember seeing the SaiNaru, did i just possibly miss it at some point?
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, and it is inside joke of mine when Sai came into the comic. Since he scream gay, but yeah. I guess that was just me..........*cries*
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PenumbraChey Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm still convinced he's gay...that's probably half of why Ino looked so unhappy in 700. XD
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOL!! OMG that must be true, can you imagine the story for that? I don't even know how he even got it up in the first place! XD
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Animaid101 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
If you're interested how I imagined InoSai to happen, please read this: Naruto - The Secret Agreement
It's kind of implied there. :XD:
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Enock Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
It's reading time! Does it have Sai taking Viagra? XD Jk!
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Animaid101 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
I think he just closed his eyes and used the power of imagination. :XD:
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PenumbraChey Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Remember Ino is a medic...she could have forced the issue. XD
She couldn't have her first choice (we can leave who that is unstated) and the Ino-Shika-Cho dynamic requires them all to produce a Clan Heir within a year of each other...
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Mystic-Wolf-Of-Snow Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol no no its so true he does seem to scream it. I notice that in the anime to lol xD
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
Trust me. You aren't the only one who thinks that. I honestly kept waiting for him to confess his feelings for Naruto.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Right? He just screams it, but I still had to remember this is a kids comic after all. Couldn't leave Sai single even for that. *sigh*
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It's always been on the list Sainaru on the comic warnings. *nod nod*
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Mystic-Wolf-Of-Snow Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well i noticed it was one of the ones scratched out. SO i was just wondering if i missed it without realizing it ^^
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Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
Sometimes I do, but then again, I'm enjoying the story more :D

Merry Christmas! :D
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's all good!! :hug: :kiss:

Merry Christmas Hotspot!
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W4STE-PR0J3CT Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
I do.  I do feel the feels!!!
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