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P.13 Cramps by Enock P.13 Cramps by Enock
Holy Moly guys! Things have been epic in the Naruto world in manga 639. What are you guys take on it? I know some of you Sasusaku fans are bump out, it sucks not having your dream couple. But hey, No one should stop you for enjoy them. That's all it matters. I know my favs will never happen in most comics, but I still enjoy in my own way. ^-^

Also, I am going to very busy this up coming month. I have work again on Oct 2, and I also have to go to a wedding on Oct 10. I'm going to be a bride's maid! \\^.^// I'm also going to become an Aunty, because my big brother is going to have his first baby. It'll be a boy! So, it's going to be wacky, but hopefully nice time. This whole year has been rather harsh, but I try to keep things positive on here. (*whisper* even when my comic is going to be drama few more pages)

P.s: D.A. Seem to change the links again. Instead of just placing the link address on there. I end up getting a thumbnail. I don't mind the thumbnail, but it doesn't show up on the artist comment. -_- So, why bother? Unless there is a <>....</> thing with it? Anyone knows please tell me?

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin,-------,--------,SasuNaru,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

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:iconrikuuzumaki7:
RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
Naruto has a point there. Hinata is not a part of Kairin's drama, so she has no right dragging her into it.
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Kuramafire Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
Even though I don't like Naruhina, you have a point. Karin wasn't there to witness them throughout all the years like the others. She isn't even giving many examples to back up her words.
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:iconknightofawesome:
knightofawesome Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
fuck off Karin 
Zen 
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:iconkingkong30:
kingkong30 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Karin jealous of naruhina
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Eye-of-the-goddess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I like your perspective on the whole naruhina thing its refreshing argument......but what Karin said about hinata is totally wrong its a typical perspective of most of the people who are anti-hinata to think she a submissive housewife.... she is not a coward at all she has stood up for things she believes in on multiple occasions......she wants to prove that she can be a great leader of her clan. people always potray her a fragile girl who gives up easy but its been stated many times that she has a strong will....I don't care much for the naruhina ship thing but I hope in the later chapters hinata will set Karin straight cuz if ya ask me sasukarin is about on the same level as naruhina, cuz she don't know much about sasuke either so I don't know what the fuck she getting angry about.....
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Shadow-of-Christ Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sooo would have kicked her ass by now…
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KiddAgony Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! i need more Dx but i must admit it has moments where it made me crack up and made my day completely haha i can't wait to see more c:
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:iconnaruto-forever-ever:
Naruto-forever-ever Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
It's Friday whhooooooo new page
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Draceer Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Every bit of that was true, and Naruto's getting awful defensive seeing as she can't manage to argue otherwise.

And yes, plenty of men might be happy with such a two-dimensional flower...but she's not compatable with ya, Naruto.
Heh.
And 'Any Man' would be lucky to have her? Unfortunately, you're a woman.
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:iconkingveemon:
kingveemon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Scematics,my friend,scematics.
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ChaosOmega88 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Naruto still thinks Karin "insulting" hinata ? but still doesn't realise she accually insults him by talking about her
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:iconyori-sama-1983:
Yori-sama-1983 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
YEAH! TELL THAT BITCH OFF NARUTO!
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akamatt67 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
Even harsher than last week, nailed the 'canon NaruHina'. In other words based on canon traits they are not compatible.
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:icongaea-earthgoddess:
gaea-earthgoddess Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm still mad at Sakura. As for Sasuke...well, I'm ALWAYS mad at him. :|
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YukiTheEldra Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
....dang Karin that's a new low
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HimekoHimemiya1313 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
damn Karin, why you gotta be so rude?
if i wasn't such a hardcore sasunaru shipper i'd probably ship naruhina. and i don't agree with Kain's argument, if naruto got sasuke and karin together...pretty sure sakura would feel that naruto betrayed her and not talk to him or yell at him, slap him then not talk to him. Also i feel kinda bad for naruto, karin's guilt tripping him and bashing his girlfriend and his bestest friend and former(?) crush don't have time for him cuz they're so engrossed with eachother  Naruto - Naruto Crying Icon 

ANYWAY i am in NO means a sasusaku fan but this story is so amazing! GREAT WORK!!
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historianGirl Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014   General Artist
Naruto is right. Hinata is maybe know to be shy, but she has a lot more qualities.
Congratulation for you being an aunt.
Yeah, I got that problem with the links yesterday. I'm glad it wasn't just me. I'm not even sure how I managed to get it work.
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Ether101 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
It wold be grand if this ends up with Naruto claiming that she'll become Hinata's hot, fiery and strong willed wife with something that implies having the children too.
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iraqea Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
well done naruto
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Lawman09 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats, sis. I'll be turning 25 in October. ;)

You tell her, Naruto! Stand up for your woman! I can only imagine how Hinata would react to Naruto standing up for her. Kind of reminds me of when he did the same he stood up for Hinata during her fight with Neji...
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addition to (3): Hell the main reason why I was so into SasuSaku was b/c I felt that Sakura shared a lot of characteristics & I saw that she was indeed in love with Sasuke and I could also see why.

As far as I'm concerned now, I hope in the future of the Naruto-verse there is a pink-haired Sharingan wielding Haruno with a MAJOR BONE to pick with one spikey-haired, arrogant, selfish, self-centered, God-complex Uchiha traitor!!!!!!
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:iconfighting-dreamers-94:
1.) YEAH NARUHINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2.) I kinda hope Hinata comes out of nowhere & beats the shit out of Karin for "upsetting MY Naruto-kun!"

3.) Thank you for your condolences. I was equal parts sad for Sakura (one of my top fav characters) & PISSED at Sasuke. I hope in the Last Movie, Sakura has closure (as in still in love with boy-Sasuke but realizing he is officially gone) & beats the EVER LOVING SHIT out of Sasuke aka THE ENEMY OF ALL WOMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4.) Congrats on being a bridesmaid & an auntie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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MattX125 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
I like how clever you make the dialogue for these characters.

Karin for example says things about Hinata that makes Naruto feel guilty and almost true.
But its not like Karin cares a lot about Hinata or Naruto.  It just hides the fact and intention of separating NH and NS.  So Karin could have Sasuke and Naruto could have Sakura.
I can't put enough emphasis of how well your inside the head of these characters, and continue to make the story interesting.

I'm kind of hoping Karin accidentally makes Naruto and Hinata a closer couple after this.  Naruto can't pretend his life his fine forever and Hinata and can't be shy forever.  Naruto needs to be honest to get over an old crush and I suspect Hinata is still shy about something else the requires closure.
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Hinata loves Naruto's personality, so that part of Karin's argument is flawed at best. I still say this is just her being sad about losing Sasuke, an understandable motive. Also, have a marvelous time as a bride's maid.
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Rosetiger Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Karin is such a bitch!
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Tori5 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oookaaayyy...

First and foremost - Karin has no right to speak about Uzumaki clan ever. She got kicked out at early age and ended serving one of the most evil villain ever. So she has no leg to stand on. The way that she actually tries to downtalk her only living clanmate is proof enough how little she actually cares about Uzumaki clan.

Second - if Hinata couldn't handle Naruto's/Naruko's personality, she would be long gone. Instead, she adores it and is actually one of the few who sees good in him and has infinite patience with him. She is most definitely no coward (many examples in the past) and while she may look fragile, she has enough strength to stand up for her friends, something that Karin disturbingly lacks (and she can and will call on Naruto's bad behavior, war example, Chuunin exam example, Pein example etc...).

Third - love talk. Yes, people can fall in love and it doesn't have to be spontaneous. Long-term friends can develop love just as well as people who met for the first time. It looks like many people are forgetting that there doesn't always have to be all hearts and rainbows and unicorns in order for boy and girl (or boy and boy or girl and girl) to have good, functional, loving relationship.

In short - I support Naruko getting angry and defending her girlfriend and Karin is just selfish, relationship-ruining bitch. No excuse, no other interpretation. A pure fact.

Oh, and I believe it's actually "flogging a dead horse", not "beating on a dead horse", so Karin's vocabulary could use some improvement as well (not sure what "living on shard of glass" means).

Thank you for not making Naruko act like a subservient low self-esteemed idiot to someone like Karin.
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Roger64 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Enock clearly does not hate NaruHinata by any means, this is clearly just her way of showing her take on the two and is showing respect to their personalities. I personally love NaruHina when done right
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derth44 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hinata is listening.
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Naruto is right
Hinata is surly happy to be a house wife
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LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
I agree. *demon - half 9-tails voice* I will krush everyone who ders go againts NARUHINA *eavle laught*
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Stacy-chan4Eva Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yasssss naruhina 4 eva!!!!!!!!!!!
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SWFAN93 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
I take it you don't like Naruhina XD
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's not it, just because the comic is going in harsh, drama mode, doesn't mean I hate them. U^~^ Things need to happen or it gets boring with no development. NaruHina needs to have things going on too, not just Sasusaku. *nod nod*
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SWFAN93 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
You missed the joking tone I had :) No I meant that I feel that Naruhina will not be the main pairing in this because the dynamic of Naruto and Hinata relationship is very different in the canon.
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Enock Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Oh! Sorry. T.T I wish I could've hear the tone of the joke! >.< *grins* Then I totally get it! Indeed. There's going to be a new coupling coming up soon. ^.~
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