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Itttttttt'sssss Friday! I'm fixing pages and I am going to finish my last commission off before I start new commission list again. >T.T<

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin,-------,--------,SasuNaru,--------,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

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:iconkuramafire:
Kuramafire Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
The fact that they are getting more development here than the manga is sad. I would've loved this relationship if they showed more of a steady relationship! I'm glad that you are showing this, even though I want Narusasu to be endgame!
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:icondeathgod41:
deathgod41 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Hobbyist
RELEASE THE HOUNDS (emoticon) Screaming Phoenix All Might Grin Icon 
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:iconrikuuzumaki7:
RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
Well, that's what the start of a relationship is all about. You find out more and more things about the person you are dating. What that person likes, dislikes, etc.
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:iconkaitlynlovehearts:
KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
NICE BUT STILL SOMETHING OFF
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:icondarkbluelordknight:
Darkbluelordknight Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Anime Emoji (Oh yay dance) [V2] Racing Girl Emoji (Ehehe) [V4] Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Sho lovely) [V2] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Heart Dance) [V6] KKIISSSSSSSSSSSRacing Girl Emoji (Rolling) [V3] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Eyes) [V6] naruhina 
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:icongamefreak380:
gamefreak380 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Continue your great story, this is awesome. im a naruhina fan. will continue to wait for those great pages to read until the very end!
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:iconromiette33:
romiette33 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Cute
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:icondraceer:
Draceer Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Very cute last panel and a neat page overall...
...but they seriously do NOT work as a couple. I just don't understand the Naru/Hina crowd. -_-
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:iconfullforcesoldier:
FullFORCESoldier Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You mean in canon or here? In canon, I believe they work because, although their personalities differ, they stand for the same principles. Both believe hard work pays off, both know what it's like to be considered different from others, and both can be stubborn when it really counts, which Hinata proved when she was willing to die for his sake.
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:iconmakmix2:
makmix2 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'd love to explain, but I'm way too lazy to actually type it ALL out....  I'm just gonna tell you to follow the pattern of the Team Seven's.

With exception of the first Team Seven.  It's all a one sided love....  EX: Jiraiya>Tsunade, Obito>Rin, Naruto>Sakura.  It is obvious that Kishimoto did it like that on purpose.

I don't wanna go to into detail, I'm not like a white knight or super defender of the pairing.  I just happen to prefer it over others.  So yea...  It's part of it, there's more obviously, but it is part of it.
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:iconcrusader5643:
crusader5643 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Me personally, I guess I like to see the shy characters get what they want.
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:iconunknow11:
unknow11 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
yay naruhina forever
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:icondragonlordjesus:
DragonLordJesus Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I am fan-girling over the last panel, and i'm a dude xD
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:iconseven7lila:
Seven7Lila Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Im a Naruhina fan but I really want him to end with Sasuke on this one. 
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:iconyukitouchiha:
YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
I dislike NaruHina... I'm sorry but I just do...
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:iconfighting-dreamers-94:
Naruto is growing up!!!!!  T~T X3
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:iconether101:
Ether101 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Hinata needs to hurry up and put ring on that. The sooner she make a proper woman of him the better. She needs to get her popping out Hyuga babies.
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:iconmaonekochan:
MaonekoChan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
I don't like their couple, I don't know how often I said that already but... sorry >.<
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's actually a good lesson to learn. Naruto has been known to shout his mouth off and more than often says the wrong things. Despite being reprimanded for his words and actions, the "lesson" never seems to seek in. However, being around someone who is patient with him, he learns on his own that he should watch what he says and does.

Maybe beating him isn't the answer. Maybe people just need to talk to him or let him learn for himself.
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:icontonijoseph:
tonijoseph Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Aww yay they kissed :iconembarrassing-hinata: but Naruto makes me worried I don't want him to hurt her :iconmenmacryplz:
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Apologizing after hurting her only makes their bond stronger.
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:icontonijoseph:
tonijoseph Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
No I mean hurt her in the sense that he stays with her whil still having feelings for Sakura , making her eventually find out .
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Nah, that won't happen.
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:icontonijoseph:
tonijoseph Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
I hope you're right.
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Me too.
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MattX125 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Sounds like a normal healthy relationship to me.
AND YES THEY FINALLY KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!  Though it is a flashback, meaning the bomb was dropped with no build leading up to the kiss.   OH WHO AM I KIDDING THEY ARE KISSING!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

I WANT TO SEE MORE OF THAT SO BADLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconroger64:
Roger64 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Yay!
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:iconrosetiger:
Rosetiger Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
How sweet!
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codename-shadowfox Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Saving... Saving... Image saved to Brain.
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:iconshadowz596:
Shadowz596 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*NOSEBLEED*  Daww, so cute and beautiful! And the same time hot. XD
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:iconshawnheaytherly:
ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
I'm happy you're including relationship issues. All relationships have some matters to work on, and that includes the ones in the Naruto series.
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:iconhotspot0626:
Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Well, no relationship is perfect :shrug:
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:iconchloemiles:
ChloeMiles Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWWWWW YEEEAAA! I was worried that Naruto didn't like Hinata and wanted Sakura!
NARUHINA PREVAILS! CURSE YOU! 
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:iconderth44:
derth44 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It sails itself.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Naruhina kiss! Finaly! Naw Naruto. Can dye happy.
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:icontori5:
Tori5 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh! NaruHina kiss! That's the sweetest moment ever! I'm sooo touched right now. :)
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