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Hey all. So, I notice a lot of you are confused by the last page...and I'll try to think of ways to explain it easier...but man...It's hard, but I'll try...

1.) Kurama and Naruto->two different souls.
2.)Kurama can possess Naruto's body, but doesn't own the body.
3.)Kurama is a totally different matter altogether hidden away in Naruto's body.
4.)Twisted jutsu isn't very smart and only notice about the Kurama when Naruto's body is being poessess by Kurama (other words chakra).
5.)Kurama pushed down his chakra away to kept hidden away from the Twisted jutsu; at the same time cutting down vines to not have Naruto get choked on the Twisted jutsu.


That's the bestest and closest I can explain about the last page. T.T I hope that help a little. Enjoy!

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin,-------,--------,--------,--------,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

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cancerberus97 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
--just because you are now a female, doesnt mean yotu are pathetic. 
Naruko stared at him. 
--al right, you are pathetic now, but because you are a female, but because you are being a moron!

Kurama has spoken. 
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MattX125 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes but lately most of his friends has been taking advantage of him sexually.  The scum.
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KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Hmph...he can punish them later in his dungeon...:)
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Tori5 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, maybe I'm not smart enough or I misunderstood some really basic concepts, so please let me make this clear:

1) Naruto got hit by a jutsu that feeds off whenever he USES chakra (never mind molding chakra or natural way his body creates chakra, just when he uses it on a technique).

2) That plant also feeds off Kyuubi's chakra, but only when he pushes it into Naruto.

3) The plant has 5 stages and right now is in stage 3, plus being irremovable, by changing Naruto's body cells, muscles, tissue and bones.

Sure, that jutsu sounds powerful - for a normal ninja. But we're talking about Naruto here, two years after the war. His chakra reserves were Jounin-like during his Genin time already and when combined with Kyuubi, it was on par with the deadliest and most powerful ninjas in the whole world. Why didn't he use all of that chakra to overfeed the plant or simply burn it away from his body? Sure, it would hurt like hell, but his healing factor preserved him from direct stabs all over his body including heart. Or he could ask Hinata, Neji or any Byakugan user for help. Their ability to see chakra and cut through it like butter, including tenketsu and chakra circulatory system, could sever that plant from Naruto's body or at least damage it over time to make it drop off. Why didn't Sasuke or Sakura think of that?

Even if that would be impossible, Naruto could still do one more thing, exactly what he did against Pein's Preta Path - his senjutsu. Natural energy is impossible to control by anyone without master or grandmaster chakra control (something I doubt a mere jutsu could have) and would turn that plant into a stone in a matter of seconds. I guess that wouldn't be too comfortable either, but it would definitely stop it and allowed for its removal safely. I know Naruto is baka here, even bigger than in the manga, but at least Sakura or Hinata could think of that (both of them saw his fight against Pein).

To move a little bit from Naruto, I didn't completely catch Sasuke's fight before, but did he really got caught up in genjutsu? Sasuke, on par with Naruto, with Sharingan that is able to break through most (any) genjutsu? Did he lost his touch in the last two years or did he do it deliberately to test his opponent? If it's the latter, then it severely backfired.

I'm not trying to make this doujin look bad, I just found it today and enjoyed most of its parts (some of them more or less realistic than others), but in the matter of powers, it looks mostly like Naruto is being quite a pussy here and Sasuke, despite all of his cool look, didn't fare any better. Ironically, the strongest of Konoha's shinobi so far are Sai, Karin and Sakura. I like them strong and dependable, but should we switch Naruto for a doll, it wouldn't change any impact he had on the story so far.
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Enock Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It's fine, it's fine. I don't mind what you wrote. It's true. I actually wanted to see what Naruto would do in a weak situation, since he can get out of most of everything for that matter. He's quite OP, and....it's kinda hard to write a story which a character can get out of the situation with no problem. I don't mean to make Naruto pathetic. Not at all. I actually want to see him struggle a bit before he finds a way out of it. It won't be much of a story if Naruto already got out. I was mostly curious on what a guy would do when he's switch gender role that isn't always about Ecchi (just insight of what a girl has to deal with) It's just for fun thing to do. Forgive me if the jutsu are very off. I know it isn't all what the jutsu is in the real comic. I mean, Naruto just lost his kyuubi and needed his father's kyuubi one. I simply...don't want to rewrite my fan comic. TT.TT 

Another thing, I couldn't catch up with Kishimoto anymore. I decided, in the end, this fan comic is just for guilty pleasure now. ( Even the jutsu (etc) out of place and the characters are out of whack, the drawing is not good) X.x I do apologies some parts of my fan comic was hard to swallow and that it made Naruto look bad. *bows* It's my first try making a fan comic, so my writing is to blame for the lack of the character's realism. Thanks for your input, thoughts, I'll try to make the characters a bit more real, but I don't think I can make the jutsu better. Thanks for enjoying some parts of my fancomic.
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Tori5 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I completely understand about Kishimoto. His late ideas are... well, I find them so bad that I'm keeping tabs on manga just for the pure reason of finding out how it's going to end. I don't blame just him, but also his managers/anime productors etc. who, I think, forced him to keep writing to make more money out of the series.

I'm sorry if I sounded too offensive. I know that the main focus of your story was for fun / turning Naruto into a real girl. That was done very nicely and Naruto's rather simple mind made hell of it both for him and for his friends, something that was quite refreshing to see. I'm just a little bit sensitive when Naruto is made weak so late in the series. He was weak at the start, kept being weak through most of the series and when he finally became a bit better, his enemies did so tenfold (hooray for Kishimoto!). If we put aside some very slight things, I think that he handled it... erm... considering how much he needed Sasuke and Sakura's help, I think he's just survived it so far. :D

I like your story back in the terms of finding and explaining love (Kakashi finally showed some brain, success!), although it spells an end of Naruto and Hinata together, seeing that Hinata loves Naruto, but I don't exactly see Naruto loving her back (he's still looking mostly at Sakura and always runs with any problem to Sasuke first, not even one perverted thought about Hinata so far :( ), but I wish them all to find someone nice to love back. I'll be waiting for a next chapter from you. :)
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Enock Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It is kinda sad, I'm sure if Kishimoto just had a couple months off to rethink his story parts. I am sure he would've come up with something better. *nod nod* Yes, I totally agree the amount of stress they place on him. I can't imagine what he has to go through in order to make everyone happy. Which isn't good, because he needs to be happy with it as well.

Not at all. I knew I was doing the justus wrong, but I didn't realize how very wrong I was doing them. It is a good insight. So, you don't have to apologies. I need to know these things, how else will I learn if I am repeating the same thing! :smile: Aww, thank you. In chapter 5 Naruto is going to be training. I always loved how Lee is amazingly strong even though he doesn't need Jutsu, that's sorta what I want Naruto to be. That he doesn't have to relie on Jutsu in order to make him strong. Since he can think of ways to over power the enemy. That's what I want to aim for. It'll come through in later chapters. =^.^=

Well, that's up to you guys. I am only offering the relationship to everyone. Like different kinds of chocolates. I wanted my readers to look at all the coupling and learn to respect each others fandom. (kinda way. I don't know if it's working.) It's the chocolates you guys have to taste, once you guys pick the chocolate you like. I'll give you the chocolate you guys need. With Naruto, I have been follow his personally as best as I can in the normal manga. He's kinda weird with Hinata, but that gives Hinata a challenge on how to do things. But like I said, I can change the story in the end of this comic to whoevers liking. =^.^= It isn't set in stone yet.*hugs* Thank you for enjoying the story and input!~:heart:
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HyanWolf Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
kyuubi pep-talk LOL thats something kyuubi doesnt do often
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Niiba Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
So basically "you know those jutsu you worked so hard to master? all the power you gained while never looking away from your goal? the ability to tap into the Kyubi's power that you gained by being the first person to ever treat the Bijuu as people and gaining their trust? Well, forget about all that. Being a woman is one thing (you can live with that) but now you also have to accept losing all that strength you gained through your live with sheer hard work, and start depending on other people (ie Sasuke...) for everything, while being a powerless "leader" who can't do anything alone."

Awesome.
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Enock Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
LOL!! Oh I can feel the love for this comic from you.
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Niiba Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Don't misunderstand! I love your story and I don't miss a single update!

Its just...I feel Naruto is always getting the short end of the stick (even more than in the manga), while Sasuke is always getting away with everything perfectly (despite not always being the case in the manga...), and Sakura just seems too..."uncaring" of Naruto despite all he's done for her.

I mean ok, so she's always SAYING how great she thinks Naruto is, but it all just seems a little shallow now because at least in the manga we still have that whole "sexual tension" thing about who Sakura may love more now between Naruto or Sasuke (we still don't for sure), and because its still ambiguous in there, whenever she praises Naruto is still sounds "credible" because she MIGHT choose him in the end.

But now (in this comic) now that she finally has both of them with her in the village, she seems to have finally made her pick (Sasuke) so all that praising now seems a bit "weak" because while Sasuke has never given her any reason to love him and kept ignoring her, Naruto (the one she's always praising and the one who always cared about her the most) lost the contest for Sakura's heart...just like that. While all Sasuke had to do was go back to the village and nothing else. Again, it makes it look like Sasuke has it all too easy, while no matter how hard Naruto tried, Sakura just threw all that from the window and chose "looks" instead.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yay!! You talk to me! T.T Thank you so much for liking the comic. I thought you didn't.

*grins* You are right though, he is getting the short end of the stick. (but that's a story for ya and he'll have the better side of the stick soon).

I agree also what you said about Sakura. For me, after what she did to Naruto that she told him that she loves him and runs off to kill Sasuke and herself, I didn't forgive her after that. I felt (my option anyway) if she's been always going after Sasuke after ignoring Naruto kindness....will her feelings ever change when Sasuke comes back? I wondered about that. No, I'm CURIOUS about that. I guess that's what I wanted to explore. It is weak, I know that. Girls have a weakness for bad boys. (sadly enough).

Thanks again for pointing out. I do like reading your comments. I thought for sure your a anti-sakura. Sorry about that. T.T
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Niiba Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
After re-reading some of my comments, I do realize that they might've come out harsher than what I intended (I was probably in a bad mood), so I really think Im the one who has to apologize here, not you =(

Anyways, yes I agree with you about Sakura's confession, and how she played Naruto. However, while it was low for her to use his feelings towards her that way, at least we can take solace in the fact that she did it to protect him (in a twisted way, but at least her heart was in the right place).

The reason her attitude bothers me a little here comes from the fact that now that Sasuke is there for her, she seems to have thrown away most of the care she had been developing for Naruto through part2 of the manga. I know she praised Naruto's accomplishments and how great he was...but all that seems a little bit empty if after learning of Naruto's curse, the first thing she thinks about is how much will that affect the amount of time she can spend with Sasuke from then on.

Even though I now understand my comments might've given that impression, I want to clarufy that Im not a Sakura-hater, and Im also curious about who she might choose in the end.

Also,
Thank you for taking the time and replying to me :)
As I said before, I actually love the story and don't miss a single update, and the art-style is simply beautiful.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
*nod nod* I agreed with you. *smiles* I'll have to make sure to be careful with her and have more of the manga has her grow. So, I'll make sure to make her grow as well. *nod nod*

*grins*~:heart: :heart: *molest* Thank you much! I'm very happy (and very glad) you enjoy it. I was worry that you didn't. T.T *hugs* :hug:

Hey, don't be scared to comment your mind. I don't mind critique and stuff, and I enjoy reading your comment. It helps me a lot.~:heart:
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valkiryethrud Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
WoW! I never thought that Kurama give him encouragement.
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She-who-thrist Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
yea but it makes sense, he is only cheering her/him up so he doesn't try getting out of say body
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Jace-san Featured By Owner May 27, 2012   General Artist
another fantastic page enock, hope Kurama makes a few more appearances in Period
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Rosetiger Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Poor-naruto.
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teamjacobfangirl Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
I love the story so far. This is amazing :)
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Akippuden Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
aww Kurama your beeing nice
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DieHardMusicMan9125 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
kurama is so gosh darn cool =D
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SouleiLuna Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Go Kyuubi!(think i spelled it right?) I love how you draw him! :) (!!!his eyes are awsome!!!) Thank you for explaining about the Twisted justu on the last page and here! it really helped! :) I love this comic! It's really cool it probobly takes a long time to draw all the pages... :s But thank you for sharing this with all of us! :)
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billdean19 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Wow the 9 tails giving naruto a pep talk did not see that coming. Great work by the way on his eyes there fantastic!
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BigPaja Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
It looks like Kurama is paying back for all those nice words Naruto had for him.
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Artificer-Urza Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Hah, role reversal. Last time those two talked it was Naruto giving Kuruma the speech. =P
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SolStrike19 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
WHo cares about Explanations I'm having fun!
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AllHailMattWilson Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
New page of Period... AWESOME! But fuck... only one page

please have mercy and post another one :iconbegplz:
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Strickplayer Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
is it encouraging him? thats a little unrealistic but still love it!
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RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Kurama being supportive?! I guess there's a first time for everything...
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geibenchan Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg when i saw the second half of the page i was so scared you were gonna end it here!
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NijiRose Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oooo this is interesting; i cant wait for next
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advanced69 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Its nice to see kurama being nice to Naruko, just like a close friend. Hope Naruko doesn't forget "again" (xD) that she isnt alone and that she doesn't need to bear all the burden by herself...

Keep up the lovely story Enock, but remmember... Dont kill yourself, take your time, your faithfull fans can always wait some more for your lovely work ;)

Hugs from the nosy fan ^^
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JuPMod Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Words of wisdom from Kurama. He's right that Naruto can still be Hokage despite his change and power-down. He just needs to accept that he's not the only one to help protect the village, that's all. :)

Yet despite such wisdom, there is still the problem regarding the Twisted Jutsu. Unless they can truly keep the jutsu stable or cure it, I really doubt Kurama can keep 'weed trimming' for the rest of Naruto's life. I doubt Naruto want to keep relying on Kurama to keep the Twisted Jutsu at bay.

Oh, great last panel. Love how the hat looks on Female Naruto. :)
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kitty1066 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this is so worth the wait <3
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gekkodimoria Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
cool
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Nafanua123 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
inspiring!!!~<3
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hewhoonlyreviews Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
I love it and I can't wait for next friday!
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nitephenix Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icontearplz: beautiful
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Roger64 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Whoa he's actually being kind of supportive. I actually had afeeling this chapter would open with the two talking.
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Cool
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AirGearSuchti Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
i LOVE your story but PLEEEEAASEE T.T it takes sooo long for the pages :D
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Lawman09 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Words of wisdom. Listen to Kurama, Naruto. :)
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