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Naruto Period Page_024 by Enock Naruto Period Page_024 by Enock
Okay. I suck at romance. I know that now. If it gets too cheesy, its because its my weakness in story writing. =_= (<-strong point evil comedy) So, this page was hard for me and same with the two coming up. *smirks*

Spoiler: Skip, if not read Naruto comic
God....Gaara is so damn sexy. I WANT HIM TO MYSELF!! :heart: *melts away like goo. After reading todays Naruto's comic. Such a Gaara fangirl* :heart: :heart: I was so happy Sai give it to Sakura good. Battle her down, Sai! You sexy jealous boyfriend you! The plot thickens! (I hope it doesn't destroy my comic later in the future..what do you guys think? Should I leave my comic as it is? *curious*)

Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku,-------, -------, -------,-------,--------,--------,--------,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them)
I will not tell you who ends up with who. I want this story to come with a surprise, and a reason. If you are a very strong lover of any of these couples and don't like how this comic portrays them, then I don't want to hear about it. So please don't leave a comment. There are many other comics out there for you to enjoy. But I'll add the couples here as the comic progresses. *grins evilly*

Warning:
This comic contains blood, Shounen-ai, Shoujo-ai and Het.
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

Rules
Do not bash the other characters just because you don't like them. Respect the characters, and the people around you that enjoy them. *glares at all of them* Just to point out.

Fans Thank you so much for reading! This wouldn't be going right now if it weren't for your comments, favs and spying. :heart: :heart: sorry I didn't respond to your guys comments. T.T I can only take a peek and run to finish up on Chapter 1, and do chapter 2 since dooms day is around the corner for me. *cries So I'm going to be silent, phantom ghost.

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Everything almost belongs to©Masashi Kishimoto
Story and Art belongs to©Enock
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This fan-comic is “non-profit”. It is free, fun and practice use only.
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:iconalexamary:
alexamary Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
aww sakura:((
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:iconkaitlynlovehearts:
KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Naruto not with Hinata....hmmm...I wonder who he will go out with then....
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darwiz Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this doujin is great! :o
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spyrofan923 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
I don't think you suck at romance at all. In fact, you've done a pretty good job. Especially with this page here. Sakura's perspective on herself and her loved ones is pretty much how I imagined she would feel post part 2.
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teenmusic4eva Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm alao a intense Gaara fangirl :iconsqueeplz:
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Danni0624 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wait, 'since hinata and neji have renewed their clan' are they together hear or what?
just wondering cause they are cousins after all...
btw love how naruto is hokage
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:iconwolfleaderscub:
WolfLeadersCub Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
I can't do romance either! When I write it I think, what the hell was I on? :D Glad to know I'm not the only one.
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z1256 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
normal naruto and sasuke look ike chicks its halairious ps. luv your searies i read chp.2 whens chp.3 comming are you almost done??? :onfire:
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smurfeyn Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i really love your story, but I've got a question for you.
Is it possible you'd tell me what injury Sakura had to heal.
keep up the good work.
sincere appologize for my English
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Enock Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010   Digital Artist
Ack! I'm so sorry for the slow reply!!!!! Sorry sorry!!! T.T As for your question. Sakura isn't injured, she just saying that she need to heal the other people that are injured from a great battle/mission. *nod nod*
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MaryStrawberries Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
ooh... which chapter of Naruto were you talking about in the Author's Comments? I MUST KNOW!!! =_= meh... whatever... I am just too impatient to set aside time to read the WHOLE DAMN THING... wouldn't that take forever... I'm so weird like that... ugh... I need to catch up on the story... but... too... lazy... Zzzzzz:sleep:
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artest9 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
when are you going to put hinata?
it would be funny if they exidently met and she doesent recognize him for a couple of moments.
but either way i like your story (but i love naruhina)
i like how you drew hinata and the whole story is funny
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009   Digital Artist
Not for awhile, She'll appear in Chap.2 and 3. Then further down in couple of chapters down. There will be a little story of Hinata also.
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoy it! :heart: :hug:
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NinKen-23 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009
Don`t worry the page is good like it is. I think it is important to bring the romance to the right place and not desperatly try to put it in the plot. Too much romance isn`t good for a story either. -_-;
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009   Digital Artist
Uge *shudder*, you telling me. I hate those overwhelming sugar coated romance. I like how romance grows (AND TAKES ITS TIME <.< >.>;) and grows in unexpected places. :heart:
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NinKen-23 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
I feel exactly the same way but it`s also sad when there isn`t any romance in a story
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009   Digital Artist
*thinks* Hmmm, true *grins* In mine, the first two chapters there aren't...no, I'm wrong, there is hidden romance. Then explosion of romance there after.
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:iconninken-23:
NinKen-23 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
=D Do you know ~natsumi33`s TUQ doujinshi?
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:iconz1256:
z1256 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
oh i read that its cute
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:iconninken-23:
NinKen-23 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
Yeah. Too bad that it had to end. But well, everything has an end... okay apart from sausages. They've got two! XD
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:iconz1256:
z1256 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
LOL
(\_/)
(O.o)
(^ ^) Bunny will rule ze earth!
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Enock Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009   Digital Artist
*shake head* No, I don't. Will you send link? I love reading online doujinshi. *waving her tail* :heart:
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NinKen-23 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
[link] That`s the link to her page here on DA. I hope you like her doujinshi ^^
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you!!:hug: :heart: *goes to read it*
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Number1Narutard Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009   Writer
It wasn't cheesy at at all! ...and if it makes you feel any better, romance isn't my strong point, either......-sob-...

Fantastic job on the drawing! I ENVY YOU!!!!
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009   Digital Artist
*sob with you* Its...so...hard!! damn you romance!! at least I'm not the only one out there. ^^ I kept staring at the words when I wrote that part. I turn into a zombie and ate my paper.

awww, thank you!! :heart: I did my best!
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:iconstrafen-soulreaper:
strafen-soulreaper Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009
what are you talking about you can right romance, and also it feels like im reading one of the actual naruto comic series
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009   Digital Artist
*big puppy dog eyes, all teary*....Wow, really? That's so kind to say!! T.T I want to make sure it feels like Naruto comic with its old fashion comedy like it used too. *glares at Naruto comics* *grins* Thank you! *MORE LOVE!! *molest* :heart: :heart:
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strafen-soulreaper Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
zomgish MOLEST GLOMP!?!?! =p :heart:
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:iconred-volpe:
red-volpe Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
keep it up! it's your story, and tons of people just ignore the original story cuz it's gotten stupid. I hate how Kishi just forgot Hinata there. :pissed: anyways, great job! I like how you drew Hinata.
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Enock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you!! I didn't know they ignore it. *blinks* I always thought they should've explain better than they did. I feel like a lots of things have been a missed. *rubs the back of her head*

Yeah, no kidding. Maybe they do have something for Hinata, and will explain itself in a flash back later when Naruto and Hinata talk to each other. *thoughtful* That's what I'm guessing. Since we see Naruto really loves Sakura. *bitch slap Sakura* DAMN YOU!! I want him!!
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red-volpe Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
haha, lol. I just hope that NaruHina will be canon, so that KibaHina will be no more, CUZ HE'S MINE! RAWR! :fuzzydemon:
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009   Digital Artist
LOL!! You no like KibaHina? *curious* What couples do you like?
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:iconred-volpe:
red-volpe Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009
no, I like it, but I want Kiba myself! :) but then again, I also like NaruHina, SasuSaku, NaruSaku, ShikaTema, InoSai, and NejiTen. really, as long as someone writes a good fic about it, I like it. cuz let's face it: nothings ever gonna happen in the canon :l I even like SasuNaruSaku, (as in threesome) because of a certain story called "Teamwork" :D
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009   Digital Artist
All good *grins* You don't mind same sex love do you? there some in here *amused* As my warning shows. Doesn't matter as long as written good? :heart:
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red-volpe Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
*le gasp* I am offended that you would ask that! jk, I'm fine with it. it really doesn't matter as long as the plot is good, and the writing isn't horribly mutilated by spelling and grammar (I mean, as long as I can understand it)
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Enock Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009   Digital Artist
*cries* I'm sorrrryy!! *grins* All good, I hope this story is well enough. There is so many stories that drive me nuts that it lead me to this story.So hopfully, it wouldn't be like....*stares that she hated when reading* themm....hsssss
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KarateLegendePurple Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
ah i cant wait to read the rest! :heart:~~!!
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:iconang3lsdem0n:
Ang3lsDem0n Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Hey this was a great page ^^
I don't find it cheesy and I honestly think your story writing is better than mine. :hug:

Keep up the great work
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Enock Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009   Digital Artist
T.T Thank you so much!! :hug: :heart: :heart: *rubs the back of her head* If everyone else enjoy its. That's all it matters. :heart: :heart:
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Ang3lsDem0n Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
yup. ^^
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Ang3lsDem0n Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
oh yea, you should keep it the way its going. It is your story after all ^^
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you!! :heart: I will! *grins* :hug:
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Ang3lsDem0n Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
^^ :hug:
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