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FluffyGoatDaddy Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can see what you're going for. 

I'd shift the eye patch strap a little to the center more to have the words be directly in the middle.

Don't write "By:" either, authors professionally just put their name. End Star would work perfectly fine 

I'd say thin the top lines out to make the words eye patch stand out more but I know Qoutev and how horrid the pictures there can be 
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EndStar1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hhhhhhhhhh-
I’m not looking for advice where I needa redraw the entire thing...
If my brother would let me use his drawing tablet and show me how to upload a picture, I would gladly do that, but I know that’s a very small chance.
Got any ideas that don’t involve redrawing the entire thing?
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FluffyGoatDaddy Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Color

Drafts are meant to be in pencil, silly OwO 
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EndStar1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Probably gonna stay bland since the child that wears the patch is ‘Mr Formal Wear’ basically.
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FluffyGoatDaddy Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wot??
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EndStar1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Child who wears eye patch = ‘Mr Formal Wear’
He wears somewhat formal clothes a lot. So the eye patch has to accommodate to that despite having the eye of Anubis on it.
(Yes I looked up the eye of Anubis for the eye on the patch)
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FluffyGoatDaddy Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! Cool
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EndStar1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hhhhhhhh... it’s exactly what I said before. That simple.
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EndStar1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yeah..
That’s why my plan was let whoever wanted to help (or just get 100 more points) take it and do something to it.
I would have explained it to yah before in the description, but you were just gonna tell me what was wrong with it n what it needs.
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