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"I feel something missing but I can't tell what it is...all I know is that it hurts"



Please do not crop, desaturate, or otherwise edit my images. Thanks!
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dailydragonlair Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2019

Happy new year! I'm here to critique this picture for Critmas 2018- Let's go!


I always appreciate when somebody takes on the 'missing wing' idea, because it's so full of possibility in terms of symbolism and style. Because the wings can be seen as something vital in the figure's psyche, the fact that they don't know what's missing, but just that it's painful, is very interesting. Usually, they do know what's missing, and why it hurts, but this lady does not. It leads to a lot of storytelling possibilities and requires some thinking from viewers. I also appreciate when artists do back-of-head pictures, putting more emphasis on figure, pose, tone, colour and action than on facial expressions.


In terms of the actual composition, I generally love it. None of the colours fade into one another or block each other out which can be hard with a dark composition. The only thing I don't love is her outfit. The bottom half is fine, as it works with the mountainscape. However, I find it breaks the flow that her bodice is so separated from the dress. It feels like it shouldn't have any gaps near the hips, for some reason. However, that's a small quibble about a great picture.

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HotaruThodt Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2018   Digital Artist
:love:
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Sapphire236 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2018
small heart - purple
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paranormallily32 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing..love love
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