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Trapped in a Dream, pg1 by EmperorDinobot Trapped in a Dream, pg1 by EmperorDinobot
Page 1 of Trapped in a Dream, for ~drewthefan123's contest.

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:iconollieboy94:
Ollieboy94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
why so hostile...? That guy was just trying to point out some things so that you can improve...I LIKE my drawings being criticised. One doesn't allways see the flaws one selves...
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:iconemperordinobot:
EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
Lol it's supposed to be uber cartoony, and SCCSkwerl and I have a history :D I had to spank him.
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:iconollieboy94:
Ollieboy94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
lol...okey...but anyways...he had a good point about the anatomy...try work and that and your comic will be absolutely supperb :D
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:iconemperordinobot:
EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
It's loosely based around Bruce Timm style artwork. Are you familiar with it?
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:iconollieboy94:
Ollieboy94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
oh...nope...sry never even heard of him :P
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:iconemperordinobot:
EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
Loook him up. He's on google. Or rather look up "Superman the Animated Series", and "Justice League Unlimited", and you'll see.
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saya-blood Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
hello, long time no see :wave: nice ^_^
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:iconemperordinobot:
EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
Hello! thanks!
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saya-blood Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
:hug: oh yeah nice artwork too ^_^
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SCCSkwerl Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
If I might be honest.

These are quite rough. In some areas, you've got a good idea, it's just not getting executed properly.

One of the biggest problems I see, is no gutters between panels. All of the panels butt-up against each other and it's kind of confusing to the eye.

You've got good character designs but the characters need some anatomy work. Though me criticizing anatomy issues is really the pot calling the kettle black :giggle:

On the very plus-side. It's nice to see you drawing something other than side view dinosaurs.
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:iconemperordinobot:
EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
Shut up. It's supposed to be this way.
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SCCSkwerl Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Easy, I'm just trying to help.
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EmperorDinobot Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
:spank:
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