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Battle of the Eclipse: Prologue

*One day, Alexis was walking back home to Sweet Apple Acres when she sees Minuette and Metayel sitting together at a diner. Seeing them reminded her of the day her father, Hyros Byodarr, died. So she decided to approach them and get some answers.*
Alexis: Hello Metayel! Oh, and you too Colgate!
Metayel: *Chuckles* Seriously, everypony’s gotta stop calling you that.
Minuette: I don’t really mind. It’s just a little nickname. So, why are you here Alexis?
Alexis: *Clears Throat* I think I’m ready to know what happened to my dad. Can ya tell me?

*Minuette and Metayel were surprised that Alexis wanted to talk about her father’s death. They didn’t want to tell her anything, but with that vicious look in her eyes they knew she wasn’t gonna take “No” for an answer.*
Minuette: Well…
Alexis: I need to know! Not only are many Selenium Ponies calling it a historic event, but I need to get over my father’s death somehow!
Metayel: Minuette, I don’t think we can get out of this.
Minuette: *Sigh* Fine, but I don’t think it’ll make anything better.

*Alexis sits down between the 2 ponies, waiting to hear the story.*
Metayel: Alright, first your fa-
Alexis: Wait! First, tell me why it’s a historic event?
Metayel: That’s because not only were there 3 kings involved, but many legendary spells were performed. This battle gained many names, but it’s mainly known as…The Battle of The Eclipse.
Finally...It's begun.
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Berrylilly Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist
*waits and rereads while I wait* Nice! I like this already and oddly enough I hear music in my head at the end when she says what the battle was called. It's hard to explain it though.
Legendoffun Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
'They didn't want to tell her anything, but with that vicious look in her eyes they knew she wasn't going to take "NO" for an answer.' LOL love that line. Can't wait for more. :)
MasterMeeps Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats awesome!
vekarvonkostu Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
So Awesome!! :D :D :D :D :D
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