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Little creature,
look at it all! This road

you follow has a crack
in its bone, Mumbai tears,
sheds silks and furs laughing

on your tiny back. Your
hands cannot turn
girls into birds.
disillusioned with design and the creative industry and beauty in general, written again on the bus

glory be
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jskullly Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
OHHHHHHH! that one hurts, I like it.
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
'This road

you follow has a crack
in its bone...'

that is some good poem-ing
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KoraM852 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
"Your
hands cannot turn
girls into birds."
what a beautiful image!
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flummo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Writer
That is a beautiful last sentence, oh my.
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spearofhope Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Mumbai Tears" Love it. Mmm, yup. Love it.
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vespera Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Oh that last sentence. Oh :heart:
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