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rain down the
stairs
the stars
rain, rain, rain
all the stars
come out for you
they see through
where you sit
gazing up
where you weep
in the stars...
they comfort you
and you sing
this is just the result of a random improv singing thingie. it makes no sense. if you can make sense of it, congratulations. i have a wav file for it, but not here. cause the poetry submission page doesn't upload files other than screenshots. yey. ok that's all.
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doomit Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
Very pretty
I love the image

-doomit
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akashka Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2003  Hobbyist
does make sense to me ... i like the beginning very well. very good flow, very fresh, just feels like spring rain, and nice kitty too =) (Smile) good work !
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