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and i saw you
wither like the wick
of my candle -
the one that lights my way
to my bedroom.
you know, honey, i don't mean to be cruel;
your violent tremors
accompanied by your tears
are witnessed
by me -
in me -
too.

i left you on my nightstand
all night
and i didn't think twice
about stopping the burning
it all happened in a flashfire
of my mind
first: engulfed the table
next: downed whole my covers
last: enraptured completely my self
oh and it seered
oh and it pierced
oh and you burned me - third degree.

i
am now ashes
i
have no regrets

you -
you devious candle.
you symbol,
you sign of
all i've burdened myself with,
and i
have no regrets
and i
cannot regret
and i
see not regression
am i
blinded by
fire
once
again?
...
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doomit Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
Very cool, very much like that. Flames, are the most powerful image
flames and rain.

-doomit
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akashka Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2003  Hobbyist
whoa i fav this. damn yeah gotta go thru ur gallery RIGHT NOW ! loved it, i felt it this is amazing. your flow is like ... overtaking.
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sixhours Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2003   Photographer
Really love this. I have to spend time and look through more of your poetry, because you have a lot of talent for writing. :) (Smile)
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grungeguitarist Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2002
Kick ass! The imagery rocks!
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xxbeastmauriixx Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2002
awesome poem. kitty rules, too.

emichan rules
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