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\"You Tell Me:\"

one step closer,
one mark behind,
chasing that light,
that burns in your Eye...
who set the standard?
who sent the lie?
who set the stage that you dance on?
you\'ll break your leg on that floor tonight.

the spotlight radiates
an x-ray for all to see.
your soul beared in the limelight:
did you dream it so, or is this a dream?

you know the closer you get,
the emptier Eye becomes.
would you halt your endeavors
just to escape the [iminent] outcomes?
your search will end.
your Eye will cease to exist.
the light will pelt you to pieces,
and your number\'ll be torn off the list...

no need for a program
already engrained in your head.
it seems you won\'t listen,
mind you, my ticket is paid...

<font face=\"Times New Roman\">the spotlight radiates
an x-ray for all to see.
your soul beared in the limelight:
did you dream it so, or is this the dream?
</font>
a song I wrote today. i am not the speaker, as the title tries to imply. this is one of my few rhyming songs that actually qualify as songs.
:icondoomit:
doomit Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
Shot stabbed and marked for re-examination.

Nicely done. I'll have to give this a second go a little later.

-doomit
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