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Assorted Non-Haiku
(Some are real, some are would-be's, some are just funky, but they all do the 5-7-5. :D)


Rock tells Fire, "Where would
I be without my partner
or you without me?"


Heart feels heavy to-
night like a water balloon
sagging in its weight.


They all stand in fear
atop their mountain of dirt.
Fear the garden hose.


Synthetic roses
line the head to her bed; she
sleeps in discomfort.


Egyptian perfume
can consume your senses or
cause your nose to bleed.


As I write haiku
I must count on my fingers
and sound syllables.


Sleepy spheres of sight,
I beseech you bid me rest,
not dote upon night.
Random haiku.
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jsenn Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2002
They are wonderful. The sixth one surprised me because not only do i count on my fingers as I write haiku, I found I was counting on my fingers as I read them.
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akashka Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2002  Hobbyist
i like the 3 last ones lol really kewl submition !! =) (Smile)
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night-angel Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2002  Professional Filmographer
these are cool Nod
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