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VI

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VI


I know I won't be
The first person you will call
I know deep down
You'll end up picking someone else,
Hands down.
But could you do me one small favor?
Just one tiny thing?
Lead me on to think
I'm the one
At the top of your list
That you'll always need.
Maybe then I'll start to believe
And stop hurting
And maybe even stop caring.
Just for a little while,
If you could lead me on, and
Lie to me, for a while...
Some poetry. I dislike titling what I write, so I'll just go Roman Numerals. Since dA is being a jerk, in that only people that pay money can get decent critiques on their work, please, if you comment on this, I'd like some constructive criticism. Tell me what you like or don't like and what I should improve on. It would mean a lot to me if you would.
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