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Bang Bang Bang

By elsewhere-
One of two spots for Roald Dahl's version of Little Red Riding Hood and the Wolf. I had lots of issues with this but, oh, check out that sass.

The small girl smiles. One eyelid flickers.
She whips a pistol from her knickers.
She aims it at the creature's head,
And bang bang bang, she shoots him dead.

A few weeks later, in the wood,
I came across Miss Riding Hood.
But what a change! No cloak of red,
No silly hood upon her head.
She said, "Hello, and do please note
My lovely furry wolfskin coat."
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Ghostgirl-Shanika's avatar
This is really good! That story was hilarious! XD Great job! Keep up the great work! :)
KagomeHikari's avatar
Wow! Thats really pretty! I love Roald Dahl...although I only read a couple of his stories so far. But this is quiet a lovely piece! *_*
cardowl's avatar
Giggles! Perfection, at it's best even!
i like it.. very sassy... like the feel. keep it up m!