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Sketch drawed while watching the games, not pleased with the anatomy, but was fun.
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Khasdannyanlord Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
nice hat!
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kaze26 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
Awesome
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Paige-Milo Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The lines are so clean!

Nice Work!
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shadowpump Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice
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XandImus Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016   General Artist
whoa! :eyepopping:
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Started15 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
Nice lines :D
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pokori Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
So cool
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S3rb4n Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gran trabajo!
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RadicalEdward84 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
Hi, Hector!

I'm not sure if you're already aware of what in your anatomy bugs you, or if it's just a feeling you have.

I don't pretend being an anatomy expert, but I think I see a pair of things that I can recognize as "things that might not satisfy you" and I'd like to go over them - partly because I'd like to know if I'm right and how good of an art critic I am (=P) and partly because I've found out that talking aboout these things might lead to improvements and, who knows, maybe you too have still have some room left to improve. Well, if you could be more awesome than you are now, it would be a wet dream.

I think the most "problematic" - and most easily correctable in post-production - anatomy problem you see in there is the right arm. The forearm is pointing right up (or, well, orthogonal to the palm of that hand) but it looks short, like if it was foreshortened (which it shouldn't, because it's parallel to the sheet plane). I'd just lenghten it a little bit (no background lines behind that arm, your drawing software should have some functions that make it possible with a little photomanipulation of the scan), provided you're ok with post-production.
The other thing that upsets me a bit is how the trousers fold around that knee on the front. In retrospect, had I drawn that (had I been able to draw that, I'm nowhere near your level of mastery) I would have decided to rotate the whole thing a little upwards - hard to explain, but if you think about the axis of the circle where the trousers end, it points towards us, and this contrasts with the fact that we get to see her whole knee.

Did you find this information useful?
Was it what you thought about already?
I'd love if you let me know.
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Juvartis Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
You've done it again!!
Love your character designs!!!
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
Great
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heromomo Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016
bad ass
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brytewolf Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
There's just something so fluid about your lines. They're so loose, and it reminds me of way back when, when you weren't focusing on anatomy. I loved your old stuff, even if it wasn't perfect <3 Not saying I don't love what you're doing now, I love to see you branch out and improve yourself as well. But your pencil lines remind me of why I fell in love with your art in the first place <3
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elsevilla Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanxs, im trying to get back in that sweet spot.
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brytewolf Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I know you can do it!! :D
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Aj53c Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016
Very Very true!! The pencil lines are just amazing
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Perrolobo95 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
What a perfect position and impeccable sketch congragulations
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RyouichiDemonRebon Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She is fine as hell
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o0TheAncientOne0o Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
I love it!
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orphen5555 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016
It looks awesome!
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