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Egons Pride by elsevilla Egons Pride by elsevilla
A ghostbuster practice and .....This would be my hollywood pitch.


She is Egons daughter when she was 8 he saw her dad and Ray do an experiment but something go wrong, Egon yells at her to get back, both dissapeared and she got hit in an eye, she started to see things that werent there but she told no one.

Time passes and she starts seeing  things, no one believes her only his uncle Peter that one day dies from cancer.

She  gets in the university and one day she freaks out when she sees the ghost of Peter, apparently she is the only one that can see him, he told her that he saw his father and he is alive trapped in another dimension, so they need her help, she hates ghosts, she even takes pills to not see them.

Then she has to go an see Winston, he doesnt believe her until she mentions things Peter knew about him, so he believe her and start training her. So she convinces Oscar (he is in love with her) to help her, and also Dana joins the crew.


It will had a touching moment at the end when Dana could see Peter once more, (when Egon daughter had to close the portal with egon and ray on the other side, they need to close it and fix that mistake, it was never a mission to rescue them but to close the door to an evil ancient even longer than mankind that was going to come out.

I could only dream.







It should be a Ghostbuster movie 3, not a remake im done of remakes.
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Kenichi2point0 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016
Btw, at the very least, it's awesome scenario for an rpg.
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Kenichi2point0 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016
LOVE IT! Great character concept!
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nekomimikairi Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty eyes! <3
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gulavisual Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Professional General Artist
Esta historia estaria genial verla en el cine. Lastima. Le tengo poca fe a la nueva pelicula. X cierto Buen detalle de corazones en los ojos de la chica. Saludos. 
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Fuucha Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
the only bad thing is, her eye doesnt match the bubble gum =p , just kidding
always love how you draw eyes, big, sparkling and pretty ^^
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darkyson Featured By Owner May 28, 2016
Great work ◠‿◠
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LostbunniesofWendy Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Love those eyes a lot!
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DarkerEve Featured By Owner May 25, 2016
Waaaaaaayyyyy better story that what ever sony is doing right now with the new Ghostbuster T.T so sad, amazing picture as well.
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C4Sekha Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yup, gotta agree with that
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Spiritcrest Featured By Owner May 25, 2016
Great image.
I like the story behind it too, much better than rebooting the franchise for sure.
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LadyCobblepot Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Really cool! BTW the story totally sounds interesting and I would definitely would watch the movie.
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ChibiYvi Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so beautiful
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anakure Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me gustó mucho este diseño!Clap Clap Clap 
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marcia7x70 Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
cool liked
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kaze26 Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
Awesome
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S3rb4n Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Es sencillamente preciosa, me encanta!
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cardboardmemory Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im gonna be honest, this doesn't look as great as your other work
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DarkSun-SwtDss Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
es-pec-ta-cu-lar!
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Antimatter-Radius Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome work. Honestly would've preferred this Egon's daughter story. I think Max Landis had a similar idea. Either way, this looks great :)
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astrew Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Her mother is Janine?
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elsevilla Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
I think thats on the cartoon.
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lolliequinn Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant! I'd go see that movie!
Yeah , I'm so done with movie remakes too!
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Mahkir Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
 That could have worked. Awesome. : )
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SolidJB Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
Egon has children? now that's unplausable!)
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
TIs quite good :D (Big Grin) 
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dbesing Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
Yeah. the new thing they claim is GB... sooo much hate.... gah 
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Cestarian Featured By Owner May 22, 2016   Digital Artist
That's a pretty decent pitch I think. But then again, I don't know much about what would make a movie's storyline good. We need more movies with female protagonists, guess the problem is that they tend to end up with pretty bad female protagonists (like you know, hunger games and divergent and all that nasty stuff)
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astrew Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Why? unlike marvel and star wars, ghostbusters doensn,t have a large female fanbase.
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Cestarian Featured By Owner May 23, 2016   Digital Artist
Since when do you have to be female to be able to enjoy watching female protagonists?
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astrew Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Dunno
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danimation2001 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Better pitch than what they have now that's for sure.
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Kenichi2point0 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2016
I totally agree.:nod:
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