this would make an awesome PewdieCry story. Pewdie: Dammit, Cry! What have I told you about walking off like that? Cry: *looks down ashamed* ...sorry, Pewds. Pewdie: *looks at Cry for a moment then smiles softly* Don't worry about it, Cry.
I love this. But I don't think you should switch it. Cry's a little more apt to stand and watch things happen, where I could see Pewds freaking out, and pulling him away. I think you should keep it how it is -- it's awesome!