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AmazingDanTitle: AmazingDanAuthor: summercarntspelGenre: fluff with some innuendo? Yes.Rating: 13-ishWarnings: well..... Phil being a bit suggestive. That's all. And slash.Disclaimer: I do not own Amazingphil or danisnotonfire and this is fiction (probs. LOL)A/N: This was requested by apsilpastille and I hope you all enjoy it :3"No, Phil!" Dan giggled, shoving at his boyfriend's chest and shoulders, "We're filming! Get off!"They were in the middle of recording what Dan would call 'AmazingDan' when Phil tackled him and pinned him to the floor. Obviously, the older of the two was getting a bit.... Bored? Maybe.Phil let a pitiful squeak rise from his throat, shaking his head. He leaned down so their noses brushed, pouting, "But I want to love you immediately!""You can love me all you want when we finish. I promise! Now, c'mon, off me."Phil shook his head once more and pressed his lips to Dan's sweetly. "Love now, film later..." he mumbled into the kiss, nipping at Dan's lower lip.Kissin
Something Special Ch. 11Title: Something SpecialAuthor: summercarntspelGenre: crack!fic, mpreg, fluff, angstRating: 13-14Warnings: uhm labor and stuff and mpreg and stuffDisclaimer: I do now own amazingphil or danisnotonfire and this is fictional.A/N: THIS LOOKS LIKE THE END BUT IT IS NOT THE END, I PROMISE. <3"Phil, I'm scared....."Dan was stretched out on a hospital bed, attached to a few machines, ready to be taken back to have James. The weird pain killers had him basically numb from the chest down, and he didn't like that. He couldn't feel James moving or kicking, which was kind of scary. The whole thing was kind of scary.Seated in a chair next to the bed, Phil nodded, taking one of Dan's hands in his own. He knew he was absolutely terrified..... He couldn't even begin to imagine how Dan felt."I know, love," the older boy whispered, swallowing hard, "But it'll be okay, Dan..... It'll be okay...."Within the next ten minutes, Dan was wheeled out of the room and back to the place he'd have Jam
What I'd Do For LoveTitle: What I'd Do For LoveAuthor: summercarntspelGenre: slightly angsty fluffRating: 12Warnings: uhm a bit of sad Dan, I suppose. And slash.Disclaimer: I do not own Amazingphil or danisnotonfire and this is fictional.A/N: This was requested by kittyluvscheese. :3 Enjoy. <3Phil's POV:"But why don't you want to?!""Because I don't want to! Why do I need a reason?"This argument, like most of the ones Dan and I have, was completely pointless. There was no reason for the two of us to be shouting at each other in the middle of the lounge.... Other than a bit of a misunderstanding.The problem, 'problem' being the operative word, is the one that we've been having for almost two months now.Dan wants to get married and I don't.Don't get me wrong.... It isn't that I don't want to get married. Well.... It is, but not for the reason Dan seems to think. I would love to marry him, honestly, but things felt so rushed.We'd only come out to the fans last month! I felt like thin
Phan- Dark Side 1Title: Dark SideAuthor: SkiyyePairing: PhanPOV: First Person : DanRating: 13+ (Around that...don't shun me if you're offended by the language ladies xP)Summary: Bullying, self finding, intense stuff like that.Song request while reading: Dark Side- Kelly ClarksonChapter 1"Haha, faggot." The boy growled, shoving me face first into the solid, cold concrete wall. Suppressing a squeak of pain, I attempted to push past my line of attackers, only to come face-to-face with their so called, leader, Bill. Wait... No, Phil. Philip Lester.Philip Lester was the "boss" of the meanest, toughest, most cowardly group of guys ever to walk to earth."Where you going, gay boy?" He asked, eyes icy. I noticed he took a moment's hesitation before delivering the insult. Making sure that my brown gaze avoided his cold, hard eyes, I whispered, "please...Let me go..""I'm talking to you Howell!" Phil spat, black hair shadowing his face."Leave me alone.." I murmured, unpersuasive. I smoothed my brunette
Phan- Dark Side 5Title: Dark SideAuthor: SkiyyePairing: PhanPOV: First Person : Dan/Phil : First PersonRating: 13+ (Around that...don't shun me if you're offended by the language ladies xP)Summary: Bullying, self finding, intense stuff like that.Song request while reading: She Will Be Loved: Maroon 5Chapter 5-Everybody has a dark side. Can you love me...do you love mine?I awoke with wet cosmos on my face. I blinked open my eyes, instantly shutting them again, as the bright lights hurt my head. Braving another glance, my gaze adjusted, rewarding me with the view of piercing blue eyes. Ivory skin, contrasted with jet black hair. So..beautiful. Then my mind came into play. This was Phil Lester, the guy who had made my life a living hell for the past two years.I groaned, a dull throb in my jaw. I lightly touched the bruised area, wincing."Dan." Phil spoke, his eyes glazed, hair ruffled and mouth pursed. He looked genuinely concerned. It must be my migraine.He would never.I let out another groa
Phan- Dark Side 2Title: Dark SideAuthor: SkiyyePairing: PhanPOV: First PersonanRating: 13+ (Around that...don't shun me if you're offended by the language ladies xP)Summary: Bullying, self finding, intense stuff like that.Song request while reading: Love the Way You Lie- Skylar Grey or Ariana GrandeChapter 2-There's a place, that I know. It's not pretty there and few have ever gone.Dinner was quiet, silence only broken by the subtle clatters of silverware upon porcelain dishes. Grandfather's face was pinched in a forced fashion, like always. Grandma's worried eyes scanned the new purple and green marks on my forehead and over my left eye, from today's attack."...How was school..Dan?" She asked carefully, trying to forget about the dark bruises blanketing my tanned face."Meh." I mumbled, not taking my gaze off the un-eaten spaghetti on my plate, which I pushed around with a fork."That's..nice Daniel." She breathed, taking her eyes off me once and for all, unable to look any further."Thank
Passed Perfection-Phan Fluff/SmutTitle: Passed Perfection-Phan Fluff/SmutAuthor: StrawcherrPairing: Amazingphil/DanisnotonfireRating:13-14Genre:Fluff/SmutAuthor's Note: First smutt fic!!!\(~_~)/Point Of View: Third PersonIt was an average Tuesday noon.Its was about 2pm to be exact.Miss.Viner was ranting on and on about the WWII.This was a very important lesson,but Dan couldn't quite focus.Because of yesterday.When he confessed his feelings to Phil.He still has gotten no response.~Yesterday~Phil was filming his MAN FLU video.Being as quite as possible,Dan opened the door."And me being a Philfail-oh hey Dan," Phil greeted him.Dan slowly walked in,with his hands shaking like an earthquake has just accured.Phil noticed his shaking body,and gestured him to join him on his bed.The brunette sat down,and looked Phil straight in his eyes."What's wrong Dan?"Phil rested one hand on his shoulder."Phil there's something you need to know."Phil responded with a nod,not aware of the following words-that would chan
HeavenI'll show you how special one breath is.I'd teach you to breathe like humans should, like every atom of oxygen flowing through your lungs creates a new flower bud on the ivy curling about your ribcage. Like each breath is heaven itself, because what if this is it?I'd pull you by your skinny wrist to the street down the block, where you could see the fireworks without the trees getting in the way, and we'd lay on our backs and look up at humankind's handmade stars. I'd show you how to see the glitter in the air instead of the smoke, just for a second. I'd illustrate the pleasures of innocence, of molding to world to see what you wish. Because this, this could be all we get of heaven.