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Now for a real critique.

Colors are fantastic as usual, especially on her shoes. The pose looks very original along with your traditional line art and style. As for the anatomy, for a cartoon its excellent, cartoons can get away with being a bit wonky and bendy...yet her back seems a tad bit too arched if you were going for some realistic anatomy. However, I really don't think this is a bad thing, in fact I really love the exaggeration!

I would, like I've said before, try and explore new styles and ways of drawing and see how you like them. Try out new poses, and continue to create the cute little characters everyone seems to enjoy. (Including me!) Once again, thanks so much for this! You did Shelly proud!
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FOX-POP Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
First at all thank you for your critique :)
You know how much I care about constructive critiques ;D Anyway, I'm very happy you like it (and that I made Shelly proud xD) and...yeah, I sometimes can't make realistic poses right because I'm used on doing cartoony poses and then I often exaggerate them on purpose xD

However... your idea is very good :) Trying new styles (both drawing and coloring) is, in my opinion, the best way to improve both your skills and your style :)
It's the same thing I'm doing (Afterall doing ONLY sonic style was being boring xD)
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