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Line Webtoon Challenge - ''I Care'' Part 1 by Edowaado Line Webtoon Challenge - ''I Care'' Part 1 by Edowaado
Comic for Webtoon Challenge

Read Here www.webtoons.com/challenge/epi…

Part 1: - You Are Here -
Part 2: Link
Part 3: Link
Part 4: Link
Part 5: Link
Part 6: Link
Part 7: Link
Part 8: Link
Part 8.5: Link
Part 9: Link
Part 10: Link
Epilogue: Link
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:iconanggita-putri:
Anggita-Putri Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good story :D (Y)
btw, how the resolution of your canvas?
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
Usually I work with 1600x2560 per page, and then halve the resolution to 800x1280 when it's done : )
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:iconanggita-putri:
Anggita-Putri Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, Okay :)
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:iconrocuevas:
ROCuevas Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Well damn... this hits the feels string.
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:icontime-moose:
Time-Moose Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Are they gonna be friends? I think I might enjoy this comic. Bring on the angst!
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:iconcartoonking1:
cartoonking1 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
Poor girl...I would be her friend. I think she looks kind of cute.
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:icongodsonvacation:
GodsOnVacation Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
yeah because having a heart attack means you shoud lstart running right away afterwards? :P
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:iconchryssipuffrules:
ChryssiPuffRules Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Artist
Your pic... Just... No.
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:iconfoolsgil:
FoolsGil Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
...I should probably start working out again.
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:iconmissip:
MissIp Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
I have a great amount of respect for you,so please continue this comic 
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:iconx--grell--x:
x--Grell--x Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a great comic..please keep drawing this. ;w;
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:iconbkg360:
bkg360 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
What kind of drink machine is that? no 500ml and only 50yen?!
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:iconwhythehellaida:
WhyTheHellAida Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
That School looks strangely familiar... good job as always Edo-kun😄
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, good eye, thanks.
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:icontime-moose:
Time-Moose Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Recess perhaps. XD
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:iconryderkirisame:
RyderKirisame Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
I love this...I can't wait for part 2
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can find more in the description. If you liked the rest be so kind to rate the story with your honest opinion ^^
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:iconblueaquamarinespark:
BlueAquamarineSpark Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
This looks good.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks blueaqua! Hope you'll follow and support this comic by rating on webtoon ^^
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:iconblueaquamarinespark:
BlueAquamarineSpark Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
I would but I don't really want to give them my Facebook info...
Other than that I can say that the comic is really good and I'll keep an eye out for it in the future.
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:iconthestaticstalker:
TheStaticStalker Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to share this on my Tumblr. It's just so... wow.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for sharing! Hope you'll support this project by voting on webtoons!
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:iconcrystyle-saga:
Crystyle-Saga Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student Digital Artist
*CLAP. CLAP.*
All I can say is that this comic is amazing so far o3o..

I support you.

*Bow*
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:iconlaurentiusje:
Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know how it feels to not have friends and being bullied 'cause I was overweighted.
but I didn't eat it away thought, and I got friends when I was around 10 or 11 years old, so at that moment it was alright. it's just that looking back the feeling of not being part of a group of friends. and although I have them nowadays, I still feel an outsider realy fast.
I realy love this comic, you did a great job :aww:
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks Lauren. 
Life's not easy, especially when growing up.  Friends can help a lot. It's not about how many you have, but how well you treat each other. But in the end you're the person you'll spend the most time with. So you might as well be kind to yourself. (Easier said than done). 
 
It's a big topic and I hope I can bring out a message throughout the continuation of this comic. I hope you'll support me by voting on webtoons for more people to see!
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:iconlaurentiusje:
Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's Laura, not Lauren ^^;
and I will, do you need to have a acount to vote?
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, sorry, haha, my sister's actually called Laura! I was allowed to choose her name, how funny.

No, a normal facebook or twitter account is more than enough.  My Journal shows where you need to go ^^

Please Vote - Line Webtoon Challenge
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:iconlaurentiusje:
Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I only have google ^^;
sorry :(

a name buddy :noes:
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:iconsecretbetweenthewar:
SecretBetweenTheWar Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015   Artist
This story is true in many levels. Sometimes different but similar faith
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:iconmrzeromaster95:
Mrzeromaster95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student Artist
Might be a strange thing to notice but is that a Danish coin?
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes that could very well be. Danish coins do have holes in them.
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:iconmrzeromaster95:
Mrzeromaster95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student Artist
Though so living in Southern Sweden (Skåne) its almost impossible to never see those. Great work btw. : )
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! Hope you'll support me by voting and keep following the story on my webtoons!
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DemonicWolfGirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This hits home so much I've been bullied and teased and my family don't understand I know that it's unhealthy but I'll never feel happy if I lost weight.
It's not the food or the exercise it's the lack of independence and the stream of depression.
I go to a gym but that doesn't help, I'm trying to eat food at other times in the day but I always eat so much because I'm being pushed everyday.
It's gone so far that all I want to do is move away otherwise I may end up doing something I'll regret.

This is a nice story and it really hits close to home for me.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for your honesty demonicwolfgirl1.
I know this is a very sensitive topic, and it's not easy. It's not easy at all. 

I hope this story will continue to have your support on webtoons until it's finished. Take care until then.
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DemonicWolfGirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To be honest I've read the other parts and I feel a tad annoyed though it's only for a good reason it reminds me of those shows on TV where they just yell at fat people thinking exercise would just do the trick.
I hate those shows they are highly offensive to myself probably why I hate going to gyms since they don't have to do any work.
But it's a good thing your supposed to get emotional at stories whether that be anger, love, hate it's always a good thing as long as you don't get depressed.

I can't wait to read more ^^
I hope the message at the end is what I think it could be but you never know.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can understand and even agree with what you said. The newest parts were to show that by associating with the so called ''outsider'' you're at risk at being treated as one yourself. (Granted it was shown in a very extreme way for entertainment purpose). It's a very dense way of thinking, but I remember back in my elementary school days that being the case. My friends telling me ''Don't hang with that guy'' etc.
So I know where you're coming from.

If the message wasn't the one you had in mind I'll be glad to hear it once I'm finished!
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:icondemonicwolfgirl1:
DemonicWolfGirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can understand I never liked being part of a click or group unique felt better because in a way you got more attention people cared about you more but they also push you.
I'm happy to talk about deep stuff like this I'm kinda my friends councelor XD
I can't wait to see it finished though I gotta finish my stuff before I start getting ideas into my head.
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:iconajax94:
Ajax94 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Yeah that's humanity...
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:iconvideogamehunter:
videogamehunter Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Love the comic but I how do I stay updated on this one I don't know how to use webtoons or are you going to update the comic here on DA.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can use twitter or facebook as an account. That way you can also rate the story and like/fave it by clikcing the small heart at the end of each chapter. 

I will probably upload the rest on DA sometime after the competition :)
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Nimaru Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoah. So much sad :(

I've seen some very broken people up close and it's heartbreaking. I wish happiness wasn't so hard.
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:iconbobshmit13:
bobshmit13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Writer
This seems awesome so far! I feel really sorry for that girl though, I know how she feels.
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:iconspihon:
Spihon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Artist
Okay I'm hooked good luck with the contest
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:iconestivalequinox:
EstivalEquinox Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student General Artist
Whats with you? I normally don't comment more than one in a great while on DeviantArt unless I'm highly interested.
You... you got me. I myself can relate to Emily in being overweight. That contrast between moments where you really don't care and like yourself anyway... and those other moments were you just want to be like everyone else... and do wonder if having a good personality is enough to make people care. In my case yeah my personality permits me to make a lot of friends, but it didn't always in Middle and High School. But sometimes I wonder about making close friends or finding someone to care about.
THe point of that being: You're doing something right in storytelling. My storytelling professor said "No one will care unless you make your story sound like my story." From the comments below I can tell, even if it's not this exact topic, people can relate one way or another. If not the topic of weight, there are other ways where people can feel less than worthwhile. Very real, very nice.

To be honest I did check out your MLP story with the Doctor awhile back. Yet somehow recently... I dunno. You've been sticking in my head. You're really encouraging me btw. I didn't reply to the last time we talked for a reason. I intentionally keep it there to remind me to work on my art every single day. You said somewhere that you work on your comics every day so you can upload them regularly. That's what I want to do for re-launching my own. Blah blah thank you again.
Elaboration complete. :)
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks Esti. I'm glad you're enjoying this comic and thanks for your honesty.  It's not an easy topic, but like you said, if not for being oberweight it could be something else.

I hope you'll continue reading my story as it progresses ^^
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:iconestivalequinox:
EstivalEquinox Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Esti.... huh I never thought someone would get a nickname for this username. :D Thanks.
Yeah it's tough, but it's got to be said. XD Also I guess one of my friends was right: If I was an element of Harmony, it would be honesty.

^w^ Oh trust me, I will! I went on. It looks excellent so far!
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:iconconrad2:
conrad2 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
this seems pretty good
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:iconjustanoth3rus3r:
JustAnoth3rUs3r Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
I want more
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:iconrandomreader-001:
Randomreader-001 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
This comic you've made has my interest. I'm wanting to know what happens to Emily. Will she be okay, what is going to happen to her next?
Please continue with this?
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