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Doctor Whooves - Spending Time pt 4

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''Creatures Like You''

Song from ''Strangers like me'' www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOVTP5…

Song without vocals www.youtube.com/watch?v=iYpkqq…

Amv Video www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayk9sa… by :icondiscord-drocsid:
Amv Video www.youtube.com/watch?v=GmlaMu… by Leostarwing

Even though this is Doctor Whooves, it is still also My little pony. And what is My little pony without a song?

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3:
Part 1: fav.me/d50tqux
Part 2: fav.me/d50wua5
Part 3: fav.me/d510psh
Part 4: You Are Here
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Part 6: fav.me/d51ggya
Part 7: fav.me/d51izy1
part 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Sp…
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…

Can't wait for the next part?
Doctor Whooves Animatic: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/An…

Doctor Whooves Confidential: fav.me/d4z5epz
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Alright been a while since I wrote a critique so here goes.

First of all I believe you can do better in your art work, I remember reading the first comic page of this series and it looked so much better.. you aren't constant enough. Although the delivery of your work is great and I must say I enjoy reading it, I think you can do better. I do like the new layout of the text, it looks much better and you still use the colour co-ordination for both the Doctor and Clyria I think her name was... I forgot.

I don't think I have seen anyone write a story with MLP in mind so this is original and creative. whether you thought of it yourself or not it is great... I do like the use of the tarzan song since many people know this and will recognise it which of course many already have.

I hope I am not being to harsh but I am on the other hand being truthful...
I know it is a lot of work making all this and meeting your watchers expectation but dont rush... Art is a passion and therefore you must take great care. Good Luck and Keep On Improving and Drawing ^w^