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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 2

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I know what I said in my last description, but thanks to the invention of copypaste I got this done quicker than I had hoped. I also want to ask you guys for a little favor, so I wanted to make this in return :) I'll make a journal about the favor, it's just a poll you have to click once, so my class can win a competition for our final school day < : )

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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
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Chapter 11
Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 2: -You Are Here-
Part 3: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
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This comic is amazing. It takes some serious work to make me cry over a web comic, and this made the floodgates open. 5 stars on EVERYTHING because I see no flaws at all in this comic. I am anxiously awaiting part three, and hope that it comes REALLY soon. Darn, there's a 100 word minimum..I am also anxiously awaiting a regeneration scene, and I hope one happens, but we all know that there will be one, so nothing to worry about there. All I ask is that the regeneration scene lives up to the standards that the previous regeneration's have set.

Ciao!
Microwave101
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you have certainly made an excellent comic. mixing the styles, the techniques of the sketches you have, make it all sound so cannon! and this is so original, there isn't anything like this in the entire fandom! man you have done an amazing job. Going this far in a comic with about 10 strips in each chapter. i give you five stars on almost everything. you have got to be one of the 25 bronies everyone should know. the only way i can give you five stars on impact is if you could make the regeneration light reflect on the cyber prince's body, because it is made of iron.
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i believe that to write a entire fan fiction and to play so well to the original characters is absolutely incredible and this entire fan fiction is incredible. Being a whovian and a brony, i really never believed the 2 would mix. and if it did i believed it would sorely disappoint. i have been wrong this series fits together well. And you did a really good job at portraying the doctor. i could really see this as real episode. I can also see your art incredibly improved. But i hope that in the end lyra makes a sacrifice because so far her character is quite annoying and whiny. i dont see much of lyra in lyra if you know what i mean. overall this is a great series and i look forward to more
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Well darn,
I finally caught up so I might as well give a critique.
*This is one of my first, sorry if I do a few things wrong*

Vision:
Not quite sure what this is. I'm assuming it means, if we feel you have the inspiration to continue this. I must say you do. The comic has stretched out long enough to make it look like you're serious about this. I can see a lot of inspiration and that alot of planning went into this comic.
I'm scared that with 10 regenerating, this comic might be coming to a close. I hope not, there are plenty of other things to add. However, this is why I gave you a 4.5, maybe you're beginning to close it as the inspiration is lost, but there are so many things to be resolved that we'll get at least 3-4 more chapters.

Originality:
In the first comic, you said you noticed that there were not enough cross-overs between the doctor whooves and Lyra and BonBon. Yes, the doctor whooves thing (as much as I love it) is a little over done. But you threw in a whole new fandom while keeping parts of both, but blended enough to be a cross-over. I wish we had seen a little bit more of BobBon before she became a cyber, but it probably would have made cry more. As soon as she was taken, I did guess that she would be converted and felt the comic just following along the plot of the DW episode (with Bon being Jackie Tyler and Lyra being Rose). The whole games thing threw me off. It was a total surprise (other than the fact we were warned by foresight) and is probably one of the reasons didn't take off a star for the reason above. Adding characters actually seen in the show for the games was awesome too, it reminded me that this is not only a cross-over but a MLP one too.
Technique:
Comparing this page to the first really shows how far you've come. The lines are ALOT smoother and the new angles and perspectives make the comic look overall better. You still have a bit farther to go, but please don't stop improving. BTW lineless cyber prince looks AWESOME.
The only thing I have to hate on is the Cyber ponies. They look almost too realistic. I didn't' know what they were until the give-away "DELETE!" I just think if you removed a few of the black plates (especially on the face) and replaced them with silver ones, it would remind me a bit more of cybermen.
If they were an original enemy you made, they would be beautiful, I just have a problem with them as Cybermen as ponies.

Impact:
Honestly, I could not stop thinking about this comic at school and stuff. Its really left an imprint on me and I really love it. I am a total DW fangirl and really love seeing DWhooves comics. But adding a whole new fandom really surprised me and I really hope you continue this comic.
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This story honestly has a lot of potential in it,and may turn out to be something unexpected. You make a very entertaining story line,and are able to attract lots of readers,and a larger audience with the art styles of all the pages. The entire story-from page one-offers an engaging story for Dr.Who fans,and bronies alike. I think it's overall amazing. It has it's moments where fans will get goosebumps and chills from the amazing work you've done. You've also included a "You are here" in the links to the other parts of the story,so that no body will get mixed up when going back or forward throughout the pages. I really like it,and think it's worthy of being up here. Thank you.
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I'm going to give it to you, you can really build up a story. This comic has reached all levels of tension and you still push more and more to my limit. I would recommend this to all my friends, and not just for the Doctor. You have made us, the reader connect with your characters, and made us really care. I barley held in my man tears at the Iron Will story and ending, and I didn't find him all that interesting of a character in the show. You made my blood run cold at the end of the battle between the Doctor and Foresight, as the implications of the Doctors words sank in. Now you're bringing all that to a head, and sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next, because I can't tell where this comic is going.
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Before I start getting into the nitty-gritty details of this, I'm going to say one thing: This is worthy of being published. You've improved from the first page, the suspense hooks in a lot of readers, and the intensity in some parts is almost close to the fiery words of some great writers. We'll wait eagerly for the next part!
Cyber Foresight's dialogue reflects part of his former character; it shows that he still believes slightly in fate. Hell, if it wasn't from a cyber pony, people might think the conversions are good. And you've made good use of the "show, not tell" technique; the Doctor is shown as a selfless, brave pony instead of told so. And I like the Doctor x Derpy love woven into the last page.
But in panel 23, his eye is a bit off-center. I think that you've overdone the regeneration glow and made it too yellow in some panels. In panel 22, the glow is more of a yellow ball than a swath of gold. And Lyra is on the fence between clueless and damsel in distress in this part. Cyber Foresight's 3D look seems a little out of place, because it sticks out too much. Derpy's been quiet, though. Could she be planning something? Plot twists are your thing!
I cannot read a THING this page
Saiyanstrong's avatar
He is going to "Time of The Doctor" him.  When the doctor used his regeneration to... (leaving you guys to finish this for yourselves.)
Vupsi12345's avatar
The yellow light around the Doctor on the last panel makes it look like he's going Super Saiyan XD
I can't forget that Foresight is the same guy who had a banana card for fortune telling
ALERT! ALERT! THE DOCTOR IS RE-GEN-ER-ATING!
Animatorsnake's avatar
PREPARE TO MEET THE TIME OF YOUR DEMISE, TINCANS!
MattX125's avatar
In the words of the 11th Doctor.  "Don't tell me the rules!"
"A New Era of Steel." So Foresight is a Cyberpony version of Stalin? I always the cyberponies were kind of like communists.
DrX-Raven's avatar
Raven: I take it you've never watched Doctor Who, 'cause if you did, you'd know that in the show's revival, at the Cybermen's firs appearance, they used the phrase "The age of steel".
AbandonedScarab's avatar
Foresight: "1v1 me, kid."
TheArtistPony's avatar
Use a massive regeneration to take them out!
Doctorwholovesthe80s's avatar
When the Doctor is glowing and says "I've got nothing to lose anymore..." HIDE FROM THE INETIVABLE EXPLOSIONS OF BADASS AWESOME!!!
starfire6565's avatar
i like part 1 because foresight asked if the doctor had feelings for derpy and he said no so foresight said to delet her but only to see his reaction and it was like he did have feelings for derpy. :)
WorldWalker128's avatar
And then he turns into a Diamond Dog, and crushes his limbs between his teeth, realizes what he's done afterwards, and feels awful.

I've never seen the Doc be regenerated as anything other than a Pony in all the various fanfics and fanarts.
troybird's avatar
nooooooooo man...he's going Sper Saiyan doctor mode xD 
MissSindy's avatar
oh Foresight *sniffle*
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