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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth End

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A story ends the same way it began... with a wish. You better life a happy life with your daughter Derpy.

I do like how I got lots of comments of folks who were concerned with Foresight's well-being. Considering no one liked him in the beginning xD Also don't worry, those small pieces of the spaceship will all burn out before they even hit the ground.

Most of Foresight's monologue was actually written by a commenter I got on funnyjunk. I edited it only a slight bit, but it was so well done that I thought I couldn't let it go to waste. Hope you're reading this!

Gosh I'm tired but Wow what a ride! I bet you're wondering. Is this it? Is this really it? Yes, however. The main story is over. However! There will be an epilogue. It will only be a few parts, but we still can't leave this story until we find out what the deal is with Lyra and her knowledge of humans. Has all that happened here maybe have somekind of connection?

With that said thank you guys again a ton for the donations! I hope you guys enjoyed this story!

See you at the epilogue!
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Part 12: -You Are Here-

Epilogue
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Foresight - I'm not your Hero - Comic Backstory
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I don't usually write critiques, pardon me if I get something wrong.

First off, I would like to say that this is one of my favorite MLP/Doctor Who fanfictions ever. This could easily be an episode of either show. The technique has improved a lot since the beginning of this comic. I went back and reread it and was struck by how much the drawing has improved. One thing I like about the technique of this comic is the way the background of the panel turns to a gradient, usually red, every time someone gives a monologue. The humor in this comic is spot-on. Johnny Bravo was a stroke of genius. I also laugh out loud every time I read the fortune telling scene with the banana tarot card. For impact... I literally have nothing to say. To be completely honest, this comic has made me cry several times and made me laugh out loud. Keep up the good work!