Doctor Whooves - Epilogue Pt 6 by Edowaado

First off, I would like to say that your art style has improved greatly since the first comic and the story line has taken a simply creative arc since then. The light effects in the memory panels are amazing. Lyra's and the Doctor's facial expressions are perfect and really show their emotions. Your line art is simple and really brings out the characters against the backgrounds without making the whole setup too gaudy. The whole "de ja vu" thing reminds me of the episode where the doctor(David Tenant) is dying and goes back in time to see rose before she had even met him. I cant wait to see if my predictions are correct in the next page. You accurately represent the doctor and his script is clear and his explanations actually makes sense in some massive wibbly wobbly way. Your story line flows smoothly, not too fast, and not so slowly that it gets boring. From the beginning to end, it is easy to see the plot and now, the conclusion. The characters have developed well and have been inspiring. Thank you for a wonderful fan fiction. I hope to see more.