Your art technique seems very clean, and It was kind of a spin-offish of the original my little pony art style. I enjoyed the vibrant colors of the ponies, even when they were...um...you know. I also really enjoyed the story line(some pages I skipped because I didn't know about the teleporting links in the desc. until the third to last chapter X3) I liked how you had dynamic expressions, I'm jelly! I'm Really happy that you made these, and I can't wait until another one comes out, maybe even a serious non- pony related!
5 OUT OF 5!!! keep up the good work! *thumbs up <img src="
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