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Doctor Whooves - Epilogue Pt 3

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A lot of technical babble. No need to understand all of it. Everypony seem to have lost some memory though. What do you think is going on?

So what's new? 
This lovely fellow by the youtube name, Quiet Water, has made a fan-soundtrack to my comic. At 6:20 there's even lyrics to the song ''Bon Bon's Lament''. Lyrics can be found in the description below it.

A wonderful fan-music gift, go check it out right here 


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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…

Epilogue

Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
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Pelerynek's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Vision- Story that you made is like movie scenario for me. It has everthing- Opening (Little naive, but in positive way) development, and ending with perspective for more. clever characters, explanation of some motives (For mlp fans things like Lyra human addiction is obvious, but not for random readers).
Originality- I don't see anything wrong, that Doctor, or almost any of characters are not your idea in 100%. Thanks to that they are closer to us, and your ideas like Iron Will backstory, bringing them even closer.
Technique- from the beginnig to the end, a classic mlp line- I don't see any different, and I love it. Also a distribution of frames (I don't know proffesional designation) is very good.
Impact- Ussualy I avoid writting critics, even if something is great, but here I spend a really good time reading this. I'm sure that your story will stuck in my head for some time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I'm very sorry if I did mistakes that makes this critic unreadable- English isn't motherlanguage for me :/
Flusstershy's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Vision: Not quite sure but i think it's how it was planned outand i think you did that well.

Originality: It is quite an original story besides for what you took from Doctor Who.

Technique: The story was made very well the artwork was great etc, overall it was great.

Impact: You made us feel connected to the characters showed how Derpy and The Doctor have grown.

This story made me watch Doctor Who and i loved the show personally i think this has made me more excited for the show before i started it so all i have to say is well done. *clap* *clap* *clap*
King-76's avatar
Nice critque Flutters!

I may not be a Doctor Who fan....in fact i never ever watched it:/
But, Doctor WHOOVES is another story!
Zeanenica's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I have to say, I started watching you only recently because of this comics (like many others) and it's actually what made me like Doctor Who. I had never watched the series, but I watched a couple of episodes and it was boring. This, however, was far from boring. I couldn't stop reading it.

But anyway, onto the actual critique:

Vision: I don't actually know what vision is, but I'm guessing it has something to do with how it's layered out or how I see it? I don't know, but it can't possibly be bad.

Originality: Giving you a four because, of course, Dr Hooves, MLP FIM and Doctor Who are not your original creation, but you did a great job on interpreting a story from mixing both series together.

Technique: Art Technique is great and improved throughout the whole comic. What I love about it is that it improved little by little, so I hardly even noticed the differences until I compared the first one to this one! I think that's really smart, even though it's likely that you didn't do it on purpose. I'd like it if you keep that going.

Impact: The story, characters and drama had a great impact on me. That's why I'm giving it a full five. I thought about for days before going to sleep.

Overall, this is fantastic. I don't know what you could improve on, really! But I'm sure you'll find out. Great job!
CMC--Scootaloo's avatar
Sadly, the soundtrack here was taken down. :( Do you still have it?
I didn't even know there's one. Must have been made over the last three years where I didn't read your comic.....
Gogogadgethat's avatar
The link to the soundtrack doesn't seem to be working anymore. I do remember that there was another site that just had the song by itself. Do you still have it?
turkey18eye's avatar
so in this comic they ship doctor n lyra right
my self-esteem shouldn't be based on what other ponies think of me, right?

He says as he adjusts his bow tie.

Admit it, you want her to say it's cool.
serwalt's avatar
He wears a bowtie now, bowties are cool
Skyguy7-13's avatar
The Mites!
I should have known.
It is not your choice whether others want you around.
TheLondonJamJar's avatar
Doctor better go talk to Derpy in this or else... *grabs torches and pitchforks insanely* :D
jhock775's avatar
no new companion he need stay with derpy that his old companion and his wife delete part 2 and 3  try again and doctor tell derpy he still alive and stay here with he family and help bon bon carrot top and everypony so pleses my good friend.
Eptir's avatar
When is the next part?
littlecrazyneko411's avatar
I am begging the Doctor not to do that whole mind eraser thing like he did with Donna ;.; it made me cry, don't do it again
Pikadawn25's avatar
Whoops didn't mean to post the comment with only a period lol. Well I just wanted to say, I have never seen and I don't know anything about Dr Who but I love MLP and I started reading this two days ago and just caught up to the end. It was SOO SO Fantastic! Amazing! The story almost always had me on the edge of my seat, or crying or giggling. It was so well done, and I wish I could make comics at your level of quality!
oooh... what this about!
o-o
lordkorv's avatar
please dont leave them doctor.
scooberk's avatar
I had never really though much about Dr. Who, but after reading all of the things you have put out there I actually look forward to watching both shows equally, My little Pony and Dr. Who haven't found a better fandom mix.
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