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Doctor Whooves - Epilogue Pt 1

By Edowaado
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:iconspikerageplz: :iconsaysplz: Hey Pony Joe, another comic.

:icondonutjoeplz: :iconsaysplz: Don't you think you've had enough?

:iconmlpspikeyunoplz: :iconsaysplz: Another comic! Extra ponies!

Srsly this page took me the longest time out of all I've ever made even if it's short. I don't even know how many ponies there are. Used at least 300 layers >_<
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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…

Epilogue

Part 1: -You Are Here-
Part 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
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I'm not an MLP or Dr. Who fan. In fact I haven't seen an episode of either. However, I can say with certainty that this is a freakin' great comic. I appreciate that it seems a lot like the Doctor crashed on Equestria, and part of the Doctor's universe followed him here. That feeling is especially supported by the artwork of MLP. It was really hard to stop reading the comic; it introduces characters well. While I only know the basics of both MLP or Dr. Who, you don't need in depth knowledge of on or the other to read the comic. You can enjoy it whether or not you know anything about the universes, and I appreciate that. Besides that, the art is really clean, showing the emotions of the characters really nicely. If I do have to complain about something about the art, its mostly that the cyber prince doesn't seem to fit well. While the story seemed pretty original to me, I can't really judge fairly, as I don't know much about either universe. The story is well written for what you said is an improv, and has nice swings between humor and serious. It has well written suspense, but it probably overuses cliffhangers(though I'm probably not the best person to talk about that.) Overall, it is a very clean and well done comic.
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let me see,
GOOD WORK I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
hmmmm..so what do you guys think?
ill say,
nice nice niece nice
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cute cute cute cute cute cute cute
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fantastic fantastic fantastic
so ccccccccccccuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i like it so much well i dont have more word to say so GOOD WORK! sorry for this but i dont have any more words so
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i love it i like it its a cutie its so sweet its a good one its a cute one is fantastic and beautiful and so much more more and more
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I just finished the entire comic, and as The Doctor would say: It was BLOODY FANTASTIC! You really captured the Essence of a Doctor Who episode, and some-how crammed it all in there, and it was AMAZING! . I am surprised that that The Doctor didn't show at the end, though it was pretty freakin' AWESOME SAUCE in my opinion. I am kind-of new here, and i really hope that this Site is as good as other people/ponies say it is. Great job well done, and i hope that there will be more comics in the near future. Until then: AVOONT-YY!
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Thank you for your kind words. I will surely be making more comics :)
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This comic was the most amazing thing I have ever read. I have watched Doctor Who on TV before, and I never really liked it since Daleks used to scare me :I Its amazing to see how much your drawing skills have improved since the first Chapter, especially the first and second pages. I have occasionally seen several Matt Smith episodes (David Tennant and Matt Smith: best doctors.) and found it interesting and nice to watch when I'm bored, but I kinda feel this comic has really made me want to watch more. The emotion in the story has really stood out, showing the struggles, the loss of people who you are close to and having to give yourself up for the sake of others.
I have to say this is the longest comic I've finished reading.
(Yes I'm from Britain, the place where DW started.) I bet my DW and brony fan friend might like to see this! :3

~FureaXOX
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Thanks for your kind words! I hope your friends will enjoy the read as well. Greetings from Denmark.
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Critique by Mackenzie1234 1 week, 20 hours ago
*sighs* Where do I begin? This was an amazing comic. Like, so amazing it blew my mind. I read it all in two days (because I have no life I was able to finish it quickly) and I can honestly say I've never enjoyed an MLP comic this much before. The story is so perfect. My favorite part of reading this entire series was watching your art progress. Before, I wasn't impressed because it was sloppy, but then you transformed into this amaziing artist with an amazing talent for drawing ponies. If starting a comic is what it takes to get better at art, I better start a comic....well done!
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Uh...you just copied my critique word for word.
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*sighs* Where do I begin? This was an amazing comic. Like, so amazing it blew my mind. I read it all in two days (because I have no life I was able to finish it quickly) and I can honestly say I've never enjoyed an MLP comic this much before. The story is so perfect. My favorite part of reading this entire series was watching your art progress. Before, I wasn't impressed because it was sloppy, but then you transformed into this amaziing artist with an amazing talent for drawing ponies. If starting a comic is what it takes to get better at art, I better start a comic....well done!
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I have been following this story since page 1 of chapter 1. And I have to say, this has become my absolute most favorite piece of MLP work ever. You can clearly see the improvement of the art over the months. And the story kept getting better and better. I'm both sad and excited to see it begin to come to a close, but it's a perfect way to end it off. Also, I love the little cameos that were put in the story, like Johnny Bravo. Again, congratulations with this story, and I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve once you're finally finished with this.
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Be aware that I am just a simple fan Doctor Who and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. But I only know the basics of "Doctor Whooves".
For starters, I was really really impressed. As I said in a comment, "I'm not even a die-hard Doctor Whooves fan and this impressed me." I have not followed the story of Doctor Whooves at all (except that Derpy Hooves is/was his companion during his time in Ponyville), but I could follow what happened in this short comic, which is a feat in and of itself. The last panel, I think, was what really got me. It was the one that locked it all together and sealed the deal. The one simple dialogue bubble with the tiny smile. That was art.
Speaking of art, similarly to the idea behind the art, the art was simply stunning. There are many My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic artists out there. Many of them are talented, just as you are. But I think this stands out in its faint originality. There are artists who give the ponies a makeover and draw them in their own style completely. Some fans think this is very original and more often like the different style over the traditional one. Other fans lean toward the traditional style in perhaps and act of loyalty to the original or, perhaps, for the sake of good old nostalgia. But this comic does something magical. Keeping a more traditional style, it locks that nostalgic feeling into place, setting the mood of the comic.
Overall, I think this is a very beautiful and well-done piece. The fact that I am even writing a critique should tell you that because I don't stop often enough to write a comment much less write a critique. Very well done. I applaud you and this art.
Food for thought, There are Many Doctor Whooves works that Feature Twilight as The Doctor's companion due to her Intelligence and Love of Learning
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Really? Never heard of them. I'll have to check that out! Thanks!
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Dear lord, where do I begin? First off, as always, your art style is just phenomenal. Second, the way you told the story up to this point feels just like a Doctor Who episode. You did a fantastic job capturing that spirit and implementing it into your comic. I'm sure that a lot of people expected The Doctor to make an appearance in this part of the epilogue, but I'm glad you didn't. I suspect that, like The Doctor, he'll make his appearance right at the last moment, and I think that will be a good thing. Anyways, keep up the fantastic work as I look forward to reading the rest of this comic.
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ANOTHA PIZZA! EXTRWA SAUCY!!!
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the comic was so good... that ill just walk away with what i have just saw... and hope that after the feelings of overwhelming happiness are replaced with the reality we live in, that i can think back to this and see what comes next. :P 

but if many of you would know... the doctor always hates endings because they are always the most overwhelming part of the story: the conclusion. an invention of Shakespeare's that changes a being, like a spell after you finish summoning it. 

we invent conclusions to end the beginning of an end and beginning of something new but it always never changes in the end. i dont know if i learned that here but thats the note i want to leave off, like a functional drive left for you to remember when times feel dark. 

yeah.. i got nothing more to say... Bronies honestly always seem to suprise me at how good the community is at telling stories, better than any fandom i've ever known to this point. its beautiful that i see it that way, that im still part of a amazing community which has its downs but seems to always remind us of what we are capable of even if in the end they don't change the world. and i guess noone would read this, no need to, the only audience im talking to is myself im telling myself a critique!

sadly when the most happiest things happens, the only way to enjoy life like you just have is to step back into the black void of horror death and destruction and so on so that the bright colours can be changed so that you see the next bright colours with happiness. 

as i once read in a story: you cant have lightness without darkness. and thats where im going to leave this, accepting that beautiful truth that allows me to live on in any possible way, sides the fact that ponies are the cutest cartoons i've ever seen xD and that they blend really good with any story, light or dark if its done by a proffessional story teller. 
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... *crying* I loved this so badly....
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Happy to hear you enjoyed it :D
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do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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noooooooooooo!!!!!Racing Girl Emoji (Please forgive me) [V3] Hatsune Miku-07 (Cries) Bunny Girl Emoji-49 (Crying) [V3] Racing Girl Emoji (Running Cry) [V2] magi gif Kougyoku  Ren magi gif Kougyoku  Ren magi gif Kougyoku  Ren Heaven's Arena Girl Cry Emoticon Sunset Shimmer EqG (cry) plz Emote 1-Yume Cry Heaven's Arena Girl Cry Emoticon 
please tell me its not over yet!!!!!Hatsune Miku-07 (Cries) magi gif Kougyoku  Ren magi gif Kougyoku  Ren magi gif Kougyoku  Ren 
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ANOTHER COMIC EXTRA PONIES!
Solarpony21's avatar
Well, my friend. It seems we have come to the end of the enjoyable read. You've certainly earned yourself a watch. ^^
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STITCH LLORA Cry forever NO IT'S OVER NOOOOOOO
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