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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End''

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I've been waiting so long to get to this very point! I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did making it.
I've decided to raise the bar with this comic, but to do that I need to become a better person. I want to become better at drawing, become better at english, write the story better than I have until now, go out and get some air with my rollerblades, and all while I still have to focus on the final semester for my school.

So I've decided to at least take a two weeks break to learn how to use photoshop which I've received recently, and train pony antomy and lineless backgrounds as well.


:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…

Chapter 9:
Part 1: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Part 2: fav.me/d5qeo79
Part 3: fav.me/d5qrozj
Part 4: fav.me/d5r9wh5
Part 5: fav.me/d5rm84p
Part 6: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/En…
Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/En…
Part 8: -You Are Here-

Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
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I loved this. When the Doctor was saying how he was done running, I felt a chill run through me. And if the Doctor was to go out any way, I think he'd like to go out knowing he might've saved one pony. I also loved how Foresight's prediction played out in the end, though admittedly very different from how he originally imagined it.

The art was wonderfully done and compared to some of your earlier Doctor Whooves comments. There are still places where you could patch up, but overall it's a lot better than it originally was.

If there was anything I'd criticize about this comic in particular, it would be that just as the Doctor is making his speech and about to push Lyra in, the speech bubbles (particularly the one that said "but my time") confused me very slightly. It may just have been me, but I had to reread it twice to make sure I understood what you were saying.

Overall, most emotional comic strip yet, even besting Iron Will's departure (which depressed me quite a bit). I loved the memory of Derpy and her daughter.
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This is just..so..action-y! I love the surprises and the unique artwork!

Its just so great! I indeed do love the parts where its sad,and then not a moment to soon,a little "humor" comes in! I am in love with this comic,Im so stunned by all the hard work you put into this comic.

The imagination and fright just..is so great! I hope your other readers enjoy as much as I do,and your "Ahh" and "swoosh" and soudn effects are just perfect.


Your artwork (im sure i've said this) IS just...perfect,im just SO JELLY

This story is fascinating and is full of wonder and suspense!
I love it,and I hope everyone does as well!








~PKpihyea!
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love the little pun you pulled on "action".
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i went through the whole story in 1 evening and loved every minute of it.

you combined the 2 very different worlds very smoothly into 1 story, without losing the core atmosphere of either one.

even tho the internet is beeing flooded with more pony content then most people can handle, the way you tell your story keeps many people (inc me) coming back for more.

take your time as you continue your story, i would hate to see the level of your work fall if you try to rush things

Do you have a prologue to this story, or recommend an other artists story ?
MajorasWaker's avatar
Agreed with Edowaado, Dash Academy is great.
Infact, it's so good that I made a Dutch translation for everybody to read!
Edowaado's avatar
I would recommand to read 'Dash Academy' here on DA.
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This comic has inspired me so much. You have made a work of art. I have never seen an mlp series that has made me sit for hours upon hours and love it. I have attempted some time ago to start a series of my own, but have failed miserably. You have given me inspiration to restart it and I hope my new attempt will be better than the last. I just have to say once again that if any artist ever created a fan fiction like this, then that artist has to be you. Am I'm not saying this from like a friend or anything, this is from the heart man. I hope you keep drawing.
Edowaado's avatar
Thanks a bunch! I wish you good luck with your own goal and will be cheering for you : )
hawkfurze's avatar
Thanks a lot!!!!! I love the End Games, When are you going to put up chapter 10? I can't wait!
Edowaado's avatar
I don't know honestly <: ) I'm right now on a small break to improve my art.
hawkfurze's avatar
Your art is alreadyawesome, I have to say its not the pony style, but its better than my ponys, still, keep on trying never give up!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Let me tell you that you´ve made a work beyond any expectations. You combined two very diferent words under one story, never lossing the magic and the unique characteristics of each word. A story never seen before, an allways improving technique, and a never surrender moral to draw so much in a so short amount of time, and so many "twist and turns" to never let the atention and the emotion fall can only be qualificated of great archivement.
From me you won´t hear any complaining or whining, because as artist myself (even if i only published two or three pictures and not of the best of the qualities..) i know the preassure and the nerves you had to suffer to make such an enchanting comic, and tinny erors, such gramatical, drawing or i don´t know, don´t deserve been used by people who don´t know the effort behind, to complain and feel better with themselfs. A critic must be constructive , not destructive, but that´s for another day.
The last thingg i have too say, in name of all your fans where i include myself, watchers or not; for a EPIC comic that emocionated us, make us cry, frrighten us, and make us fight along the doctor and his frriends...
Thank You
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I've been watching this comic from the near beginning probably like some people here. I've very much come to enjoy this series and it never ceases to amaze me and keep me at the edge of my seat while reading it. I have encountered very few comics, fictions, and stories with such creative storytelling and emotional impact. It just keeps getting better the more you read into it.
If this was an actual comic book, sadly its not, but if it was, I would never set it down until I finished reading the entire thing! The characters are compelling, the story is entertaining, the character development is just outstanding, and there are many memorable moments that many just love to read over and over, and you just always want to know what happens next. What's more interesting is you managed to capture the theme of both universes without even breaking rules of the two universes, its just simply remarkable and incredible. Its a story that the artist has pour all their love and soul into.
I cannot express how much I've come to love this series you made, I really can't thank you enough for giving us such an amazing piece of art and storytelling to read as well as how you can't thank us enough for giving this comic the love it needs. And of course I will be anticipating the next chapter to this great story that this series has came to be, and I'm sure it'll be worth the wait.
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I've been following you since the first chapter, and I can't imagine the amount of effort you put into this. The storyline has a very Doctor Who feel to it.

The only thing I'm not much of a fan of is the dialogue. There are parts in which it's obvious what you're trying to say... but things occasionally get lost in translation. If you could fix the run-on sentences, and avoid using more than two "and's" in a sentence, it would really help keep the reader in the story.

Perhaps you could get someone to help polish your transcripts. (I'd even volunteer) You're a great artist, and I love what you have done with the story. I just think you could improve on the character speech.
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First let me say that you are an excellent artist with incredible stamina. I've followed others that put out half the amount of work you do and in twice the time. The sheer volume of art you produce is staggering by comparison. Not only for it's quality, but it's quantity as well.
I am a recent watcher and read through pretty much everything on a weekend and at the end of each chapter I grew more and more enthralled with the story and the characters you portrayed. You've captured the essence of both the 10th Doctor and MLP in a way that is not only creative, but doesn't break the rules of two VERY different worlds.
If I had any complaints it's that you have the occasional spelling error, but it's not uber distracting for me. All in all it's a great series and I look forward to seeing how Lyra and Doctor get out of this mess.
Saiyanstrong's avatar
Called it.  who ever wins becomes cyber leader.
Lyokoheros's avatar
I found this series last saturday. Then I started to read it with my younger brother(well to be more precise I simultaneously dubbed it for him, because he's not so good at English, but on the other hoof this let me to more get into the story and fell them even better... that's great way of reading) and we are both really excited about it. Idea of conecting this two conceptions: Doctor Hooves as Doktor and loving humans Lyra was just brilliant, the same like the whole story, including backstories of other characters. 
And every page make us both want to read next... 
Maybe i didn't watched "Doctor Who" series before(but still I know some facts about the Doctor, because my friend is fan of this series) but this make me really want to watch it. 

And also have a question to You... I think about translating this great comic into Polish whould You agree for that? And perhaps You could give me the pages in version without text so I could just fill appropriate places with translated text? Then i can publish it myself(of course with full credits and links to the orginal!) or send it to You, and you'll publish - it's up to You which way You choose. 
Edowaado's avatar
Hello Lyoko

I'm thrilled to hear how much you enjoyed my graphic story of Doctor Whooves. Even though it's a long time I've finished it, I'm alwats happy to see new readers who took their time to read it.

Your offer for translating is also very much flattering. I don't have all the pages blanked out, but I have some of the chapters somewhere. It might take me a bit to find them, but I can send them to you if you're stil interested. 

In any case, thanks for your readership, hope you'll keep watching me for more comics to come!
Lyokoheros's avatar
Maybe You're not the first one who's doing this but... having my name shortened to Lyoko is kinda strange for me(I don't know if You know but Lyoko is name of some virtual world - from one of my very favourite cartoon)... but back to the topic...
Maybe this story was finished before i even start to read it but even if sometimes this short notes under every page seem sometimes like directed to me(like this about this who didn't watch Doctor Who and can see regeneration for the first time). That was really cool story, despite the ending was disappointing... but well this I better write in comments to the last page of epilogue. 
And despite this disappointed at the end I'm still really willing to do this translation, so i'll send You my e-mail via private messege. And this that it make took some time... well that's not problem, even without that I have many things I work on (maybe even to many, but well who cares), and propably this translation wouldn't be done very fast. But still I really want to do it. 
Kartoffelkamm's avatar
man, this comic and Creeping In My Soul by Cryoshell...
i got no words for that...
Animatorsnake's avatar
WAIT, wasn't that supposed to be given the the second person who made it out... oh right the Doctor isn't compatible
AngelflyXD's avatar
doctar saved everybody- i mean pony
CatchyArtz's avatar
Inteeeeennnnssseeee
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