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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 3

Still working on the lineartless backgrounds. This is a story a friend of mine once told me.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…

Chapter 9:
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3: -You Are Here-
Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8:…

Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11:…
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stonelie's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think this is series is great and all but you are not including all the doctors abilities.For example he can see forward in time too. And where is the Cybermen no mercy rule. Wheres the bow tie and the fez ad puns. You are doing a great job but you need to add more stuff. And can you explain stuff to people how don't know about doctor who but explain it in the comic. You need to do more research about doctor who instead making stuff up.No offence.And wheres the master just asking and the 4 knocks but most important the daleks
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is a very far way to come for an artist like you, I believe, and I think that a person like you should deserve more attention for all the effort you have amassed into this comic, with your art improving every step of the way taken.

I am going to proceed to critiquing this specific strip:

You have done a fairly good job with the shading on a few panels, and it is a very nice additional small detail added to "polish up" this comic. I thought that you could perhaps change the way that Foresight was positions or the way his expression changes.

Now for overall critique on wholesale comic:

The story telling is so profound and can impact the reader in such a way that, possibly, even a person unfamiliar with Dr. Who can follow and understand everything, and develop a subconscious relationship with the characters in this story: a sign of a special literate talent.

Despite the huge improvement that your artwork underwent this whole time, i think you still need a few extra step before i can call you a fully mastered artist.

Few people can go such ways to do what you have accomplished today, and you have to be proud of what you did. Disregard any undermining comment made to you on your efforts, remember that you have a storytelling knack that few can muster well enough to create an elaborate and memorable story.

Keep on going, and don't stop no matter what.
NecromancerKing85's avatar
death pony looks WICKED COOL
ZanarNaryon's avatar
Kinda sounds like the Meeting in Samara from the latest Sherlock episode

A man is at a market in the mighty city of Bagdad. Through the crowd, he sees a stranger, looking directly at him, puzzled. The man realizes that the stranger is Death. Fearful, he runs away, hoping he can run from Death. Finally, he reaches the city Samara, believing he will be safe there. But not before he has entered the city, is Death standing there, looking at him. The man walks up to Death, and says; "I give up. If you can find me here, there is nowhere you can't find me. But tell me one thing: Why did you look confused when you saw me in Bagdad?"
"Because" said Death. "I was supposed to meet you tonight, here, in Samara"
Summer-Lime's avatar
that's a creature from Kijudo!
Animatorsnake's avatar
A power like that shouldn't be given to anypony or any creature in fact
1cosmiconsciousness's avatar
Same thing in Kung-Fu Panda, both movies. Someone tries to stop the future they don't like, which causes events to lead to what they were trying to prevent.
princessjulliet123's avatar
who needs sleep? HA! thank you for scaring the crap out of me -_-
Aveangeladarkangel's avatar
Well I didn't want to sleep tonight anyway
helios485's avatar
wow, that grim reaper at the last panel looks a lot more like Black Feather of Shadow Abyss.…
ArmoredAlienArtist's avatar
by far my favorite page so far :D
TakeruDavis's avatar
Ah, classic story of self-fulfilled prophecy
LittleB100Bird's avatar
wow... I love Foresight to death but... now he's creeping me out >w< I neeeeeed to draw him.
Doctorwholovesthe80s's avatar

I've heard of this story too. *shudders*

Foresight reminds me of a few Yu-Gi-Oh! villains. The way he keeps going on about destiny, the way he is arrogantly talking to the Doctor and not going to stop yammering anytime soon.

DrX-Raven's avatar
Raven: That was just one guy.
MissSindy's avatar
can I fanart Foresight? is that possible? is that a thing? I would very much like to do so
Edowaado's avatar
Go right ahead.
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DakuKira's avatar
Why does Foresight remind of the Master
Rockethead117's avatar
Foreshadowing, perhaps? ( hopefully. )
Shadoe123's avatar
Am I the only one who sees the connection between The Merchant of S'aabata or something like that?
lkz665's avatar
foresight is starting to creep me out.....
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