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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 3 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 3 by Edowaado
Still working on the lineartless backgrounds. This is a story a friend of mine once told me.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…

Chapter 9:
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3: -You Are Here-
Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8:…

Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11:…
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This is a very far way to come for an artist like you, I believe, and I think that a person like you should deserve more attention for all the effort you have amassed into this comic, with your art improving every step of the way taken.

I am going to proceed to critiquing this specific strip:

You have done a fairly good job with the shading on a few panels, and it is a very nice additional small detail added to "polish up" this comic. I thought that you could perhaps change the way that Foresight was positions or the way his expression changes.

Now for overall critique on wholesale comic:

The story telling is so profound and can impact the reader in such a way that, possibly, even a person unfamiliar with Dr. Who can follow and understand everything, and develop a subconscious relationship with the characters in this story: a sign of a special literate talent.

Despite the huge improvement that your artwork underwent this whole time, i think you still need a few extra step before i can call you a fully mastered artist.

Few people can go such ways to do what you have accomplished today, and you have to be proud of what you did. Disregard any undermining comment made to you on your efforts, remember that you have a storytelling knack that few can muster well enough to create an elaborate and memorable story.

Keep on going, and don't stop no matter what.
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NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
death pony looks WICKED COOL
Saiyanstrong Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Kinda sounds like the Meeting in Samara from the latest Sherlock episode

A man is at a market in the mighty city of Bagdad. Through the crowd, he sees a stranger, looking directly at him, puzzled. The man realizes that the stranger is Death. Fearful, he runs away, hoping he can run from Death. Finally, he reaches the city Samara, believing he will be safe there. But not before he has entered the city, is Death standing there, looking at him. The man walks up to Death, and says; "I give up. If you can find me here, there is nowhere you can't find me. But tell me one thing: Why did you look confused when you saw me in Bagdad?"
"Because" said Death. "I was supposed to meet you tonight, here, in Samara"
Summer-Lime Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
that's a creature from Kijudo!
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
A power like that shouldn't be given to anypony or any creature in fact
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Same thing in Kung-Fu Panda, both movies. Someone tries to stop the future they don't like, which causes events to lead to what they were trying to prevent.
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
who needs sleep? HA! thank you for scaring the crap out of me -_-
Aveangeladarkangel Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I didn't want to sleep tonight anyway
helios485 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
wow, that grim reaper at the last panel looks a lot more like Black Feather of Shadow Abyss.…
ArmoredAlienArtist Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
by far my favorite page so far :D
TakeruDavis Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, classic story of self-fulfilled prophecy
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
LittleB100Bird Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
wow... I love Foresight to death but... now he's creeping me out >w< I neeeeeed to draw him.
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I've heard of this story too. *shudders*

Foresight reminds me of a few Yu-Gi-Oh! villains. The way he keeps going on about destiny, the way he is arrogantly talking to the Doctor and not going to stop yammering anytime soon.

DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: That was just one guy.
MissSindy Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
can I fanart Foresight? is that possible? is that a thing? I would very much like to do so
Edowaado Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Go right ahead.
MissSindy Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
DakuKira Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Why does Foresight remind of the Master
Rockethead117 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Foreshadowing, perhaps? ( hopefully. )
Shadoe123 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Am I the only one who sees the connection between The Merchant of S'aabata or something like that?
lkz665 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
foresight is starting to creep me out.....
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Well I didn't know I was supposed to meet you here now did I? Death can be so insensitive.
Retro7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013   General Artist
(In a fetal position) It's a series about cute ponies. No on can get hurt. It's a series about cute ponies,. No on can get hurt T_T Its a series about cute ponies, no on can get hurt.
Dragonlover2170 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
holygreatgrandparome Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well. That was creepy.
shahiirosan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
This part reminds of Harry Potter..The story of Beedle the Bard I think?
SaverCat Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
bronies, welcome back to the 80's.
Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he run to his own death...
EldritchLJThurston Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks like the grim reaper has been horsing around with his looks!!!
FlowerOfEden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EldritchLJThurston Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You! Thank You!
mrBronyDash Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
isn't it faith?
matchmakingdove1028 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
magician i hate u sooo much i will kill u one day
erpae Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
weird death pony. -eyeballs death pony suspiciously-
DragonSoul4579 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
death be trollin
PaxMano33 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ive actually heard that story before. you changed it quite a bit. *ahem*:
a young man walked into town one day and saw Death staring at him from across the square. startled, confused, and more than a little bit scared, he ran to hire a carriage to take him to the next town as fast as he could. he ran into a nearby restaurant and quickly ordered a meal and a pint of whiskey, but after the waitress had retreated into the kitchen, he was shocked to see Death at a nearby table, looking at him in the same way as before. he left immediately, chartering a boat to take him to a town across the sea, far away from Death and his old life. he arrived in a portside town, and went straight to the tavern to rent out a room. he locked himself in, boarded the windows, barricaded the door, and started a fire in the fireplace to ensure he didnt freeze in the night. he stood, turning to grab a log from the fire, only to see Death resting in the armchair behind him. at this he wailed piteously: "What drives thee to persecute me in such a fashion as this! Why did you not just take me in the market square, all those years ago?"
"Because it wasnt your time." said Death.
"Then why did you stare? Why did you focus your attentions on me?"
at this Death smiled grimly and said: "I didnt. i was shocked to see you in the square and to find you in the restaurant, for it wasnt your time in either of those places. no, for all along the way, it has been here that i was to finally meet you."
and there was much wailing and gnashing of teeth, and on on the boat to Tartarus, much more facepalming. if you listen closely, in the darkest of nights, when the wall between us and the ether grow thin as spider's silk, you can still here him facepalming to this very day in the Fields of Asphodel.
thats my time everybody. thanks and have a nice day.
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Grog18 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

My father would tell me that story
crowfeather72 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
this is a great comic btw i love it!
ShadowShogun50 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HA! Kaijudo XD
Rymac-Ars-Nova Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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gizmo01 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now thats an awesome way to describe the grim reaper pony :D
True-Solunar Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
I actually recall hearing this story like this one... Basically it's the "You can't ever escape your fate" type of deal...
PinkieDraw Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love Foresight's death story. Very smart.
Bluehorse14 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Dude seriously? That's Grimdark as fuck
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How is this grimdark? :)
Bluehorse14 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
The story with the grim reaper
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just because there's a Grim Reaper doesn't mean the story is grim-dark. :)
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