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Dan vs Bronies Ch 1 - The Grand Plan END



Aaaand that's it for the first chapter!

Very sorry these parts aren't that long, but there's gonna happen more and more as the story moves on. Nevertheless I hope enjoyed this new installment. I'll do my best to get to chapter 2 as soon as possible.

Oh yeah and happy friday the 13th! We'll have another one of those next month as well.

Also If you haven't seen the Dan vs Pinkie Pie commercial check it out here…

:bulletblack: Dan vs

Introduction: Link 

Chapter 1:
Part 1: Link
Part 2: Link
Part 3: Link
Part 4: Link
Part 5: Link
Part 6: Link
Part 7: Link
Part 8: - You Are Here -

Chapter 2: Link


Dan Vs. @ The Hub and Stars Media

Working with error-man

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like the idea of Dan Vs Bronies and I think you have done a excellent job at portraying how it would happen. The quality in the pictures is very professional and I don't have a hard time at all seeing what is happening. Though, I do suggest you make the words a little bigger. For those with bad eye-sight it would be difficult reading. They don't have to be that much bigger. Only a little.

As for the impact, I am always excited to see this comic update. I am very much into the story line, and can't wait to see what you do with Dan and the Bronies. Will he become one? Will he get his revenge, or will he only punish the bronies who have wronged him? This will be answered further on in the story, I am sure.

I will continue to read these comics until the very end. But I do have one more suggestion. Please update more often. I understand life gets in the way often, but if you can find time to work on the comics more, then I suggest doing so. Thank you for your time and thank you for reading this.