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Party time!!! :)

I've gotten some feedback about the colorful speech bubbles being too distracting and punchy. Does anyone else feel that way?

Jocelyn Liang
ebonysnowwhite.blogspot.com
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:iconmadcatter15:
MadCatter15 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional General Artist
Scary cute goblin cat! xD aww I'm loving this so far!
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student General Artist
I like the speech bubbles as they are.
I also feel like she became shorter in panel two of page 19?
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I changed the speech bubbles from the original version. They were a bit hard to read for some people, so now they're solid colors.
Oh, she's sitting in that panel :).
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
OH. xDDD;
That makes so much more sense!!
I appreciate you writing back. (: <3
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
No problem. Glad it makes sense now :).
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Terrajaide Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
:iconohnoplz: Oh, no!
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Most epic emoticon ever!
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Terrajaide Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
Haha! :D
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aileen Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
The color of the speech bubbles is fine, it's the font that makes reading so difficult.
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Puppy-eater Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student General Artist
I've really liked the speech bubbles so far, they blend really well into the overall aesthetic.
The story's been awesome too! I'm sensing some dark undertones that are exciting me. :eager:
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Eliza-Aacher Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
I like the speech bubbles. And the whole thing. ;) It's so beautiful! :love:
Intriguing story and characters too. :)
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:iconcharanty:
Charanty Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
And i was right.
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KuroshitsujiFacebook Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the speech bubbles!
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SilverLady7 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Professional General Artist
Of course it had to be something wrong...
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Astidamia Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oooh, I cannot wait for the next pages! :drool: :clap: :clap:

I don't know, personally I like the colorful speech bubbles, they are fun and help identifing who's speaking...sometimes I must confess I have some difficulties reading what's written, but I have problems with my own handwriting, so I don't think it's your fault at all! ^^;

This goblin-cat is an interesting character...I guess everything is not exactly as it appears, but if it was, what kind of fairytale will it be? ;)
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for your feedback! I agree that the font can be hard to read sometimes, but I can't find a better one that has the look I want. I'll keep looking and hopefully I'll come across one that's more legible.

Cats are sly creatures, goblins are savages. When you put it together, you don't exactly get a trustworthy friend :P.
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Astidamia Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're most welcome! Aah, I see...you're right about the font, it fits this kind of story perfectly, it would be a pity to change it. ^_^

Hahah, well cats may be sly and goblin savages, but it's also true that both are really loyal if you manage to conquer them....so we'll se what our little princess will do ;)
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Juro89 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Every time i love it more and more. And i'm the #1 fan of the cat goblin, he's too beautifull =)
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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finni Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I like the colorful speech bubbles. They might be punchy but visually they're very fun to look at, though I would keep them flat instead of gradient aaaaand m-maybe use a font that's more legible.... or adjust your line spacing a little to make the text less awkward? (alt+up/down arrow keys on a PC) I have a really hard time reading your pages and that's something you reaaaally want to avoid haha....

I loooove your work though!! There's so much texture and great use of close-up shots!!
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, finni! As much as I hate font hunting, I think I might have to for the sake of legibility. Some of the fonts I use don't have the best kerning and spacing anyway. Didn't know there were hot keys for that! That makes life so much easier.
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Chocalatka Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Student Photographer
I like the speech bubbles.

And here I was thinking the cat was a nice person.. err.. cat.. creature.. thing.. :D
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Cool, guess the colorful bubbles are here to stay!

He's a cat goblin :). cat+goblin=untrustworthy!
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Chocalatka Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Student Photographer
I hope they don't eat her O,O
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
We shall see ;).
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Chocalatka Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Student Photographer
That little wink scares me xD
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cat-whiskers Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I personally like colorful speech bubbles and yours are awesome.
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :).
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cat-whiskers Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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silentboardwalk Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I dig your character design. Visually a lot of fun to look at. :)
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ebonysnowwhite Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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