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The sand was wet, it sunk into Charlies nails like an encroaching pest; unrelenting and gross. All irritants were blurred by his passionate vigour. He worked like a horse, hurtling through the sand; gouging it and carelessly discarding it to the side. “Susie,” he called. “Come and help me dig!”

She rolled her eyes at him, “What for?” He was too young and audacious for her. With a limp she came to his side; her old body fatigued.

“Something amazing, something absolutely glorious,” Charlies eyes sparkled with wonder as he continued to dig.

“Something amazing, huh?” Susie crouched down beside the decent hole he had dug, “How about I watch whilst you dig?”

He looked at her with a knowing glance. “Susie, you always just watch.”

She smiled haughtily. “It’s what I’m good at.”

“Fine,” he huffed. “But you better not steal the treasure from me last minute.”  Charlie eyed her warily before continuing to dig. His body thrummed with anticipation.

 “I’ve found it!” Charlie barked with excitement and scratched at it with a paw.

Susie was quick as she snatched the bone up with her jaw and ran off with her tail wagging.

“Hey!” Charlie growled, chasing after her. 

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This was an entry for my schools 200 word writing competition, the prompt was 'find your treasure'. I hope you guys like it! 

 The dark seemed to expose all the raw, human impulse threaded through my veins; I was wide eyed and bewitched by the nostalgic taste of the night. How long had we been gone? Some instinctual quintessence buried in the marrow of me tore through my gentle layer of humanity as I ventured through the thickets. How many trees had we passed? The cadence of my heart was stronger, louder than before; it was a party of mad deception. Had I been poisoned by the essence of night?

Something about it was magical, the thread of reality had been cut but a new thread had been tied – a thread of the earth, the land. I wanted to run, drag my nails through the dirt of the land, howl to the moon and be caressed by the hungry, verdant limbs.

Haji glanced at me, the bulb in his throat danced. “We are close.”

“Haji,” I murmured. “I feel more than I’ve ever felt.”

“You’re mad. We haven’t even been in the thick for that long.” He scratched his chin and looked to the sky in rumination before continuing. “It’s the spell of the night, Ada. Don’t let it control you; we are not savage like the beasts that inhabit the wilderness. Don’t lose your humanity.”

Before I could reply the spiralling noise of a dart dashed past me, lodging itself into a behind tree. A panicked squeak left my lips as I stared to Haji. He paused; his eyes wide and his mouth open. The intimidating thud of footfalls cascaded through the brush of foliage.

“Just do as they say Ada, once they figure out that we are from the village everything will be fine.” He whispered. His eyes raced nervously, sabotaging the calm of his voice.

Village men with spears in their hands and war colours on their skins circled us. “Trespassers,” one spat.

“What are you doing in these parts?” Another pushed out his bronze chest.  

“We should kill them right here.” Many nodded in agreement.

“No, not the girl.” A third sneered.

A man of utter confidence stood forward. He wore a headdress made of the tufts of night beasts and beads of shined bone. His skin was adorned with the drag of lustrous metals; gold and silver. He lifted a hand to silence his people. “Take them to our leader; he will decide what to do.”  

Hey! So I'm going to be on holidays pretty soon and thought I should open up some commissions These commissions will be short creative pieces from around 100-1000 words and are currently only available in points. 

Here are my examples: WMM | samplejasper | sample and find your treasure.

Prices: (negotiable) 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black every 500 words = 300 points. (Fair prices can always be worked out depending on the nature and length of your commission, just note me.) 

Knife Emoji GORE: + 100 points
Heart EROTICA: + 100 points

I will write: 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!LGBT
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Smut/NSFW
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Original Fiction
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Torture/Gore
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Fantasy (vampires, werewolves etc.
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Horror 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!BDSM
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!DDLG (plus all other little acronyms


I won't write: 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Rape 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Incest
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Bestiality
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!
 
     
 

Terms and Conditions: 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black The commissioner must pay in full before the commission commences (through the commission widget).
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Writing progress will be sent to the commissioner for any alterations. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black No refunds are offered, unless I, the writer, is unable to complete the commission or the commissioner decides to cancel their commission before I have started.   
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black The commissioner must complete a comprehensive plot with what occurs, in dot points, from start to finish.
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black If the story is OC based images are required. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Character bio must be filled with characters personality and traits, this section does not need to be as extensive for fandom characters. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Let me know whether explicit language is okay or not.  


 
Form: 

Username: 
Fandom/or OC's: 
Genre: 
Characters (include bio + relationships with other characters): 
Plot/ Story Arc: 
Length:
Anything else: 



Thank you for considering my commissions! Have a great day :) 





    

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HELLO! My name is Erin!

it's so hard to actually fill this in without sounding like a stuck up bum. so here i am, in my final form, no grammar and all - the truth is..... im a mess.

there i said it.

lol how many grammar nazi's did this destroy? me too
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Hey! So I'm going to be on holidays pretty soon and thought I should open up some commissions These commissions will be short creative pieces from around 100-1000 words and are currently only available in points. 

Here are my examples: WMM | samplejasper | sample and find your treasure.

Prices: (negotiable) 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black every 500 words = 300 points. (Fair prices can always be worked out depending on the nature and length of your commission, just note me.) 

Knife Emoji GORE: + 100 points
Heart EROTICA: + 100 points

I will write: 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!LGBT
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Smut/NSFW
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Original Fiction
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Torture/Gore
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Fantasy (vampires, werewolves etc.
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Horror 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!BDSM
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!DDLG (plus all other little acronyms


I won't write: 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Rape 
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Incest
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!Bestiality
Rose (Black) Bullet - F2U!
 
     
 

Terms and Conditions: 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black The commissioner must pay in full before the commission commences (through the commission widget).
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Writing progress will be sent to the commissioner for any alterations. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black No refunds are offered, unless I, the writer, is unable to complete the commission or the commissioner decides to cancel their commission before I have started.   
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black The commissioner must complete a comprehensive plot with what occurs, in dot points, from start to finish.
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black If the story is OC based images are required. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Character bio must be filled with characters personality and traits, this section does not need to be as extensive for fandom characters. 
Pixel Rose Bullet - Black Let me know whether explicit language is okay or not.  


 
Form: 

Username: 
Fandom/or OC's: 
Genre: 
Characters (include bio + relationships with other characters): 
Plot/ Story Arc: 
Length:
Anything else: 



Thank you for considering my commissions! Have a great day :) 





    

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charmsp1 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday!birthday cake 
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ebee-the-artist Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Wahhhh thank you! Sorry for the late reply... 
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PinkDerpyUnicornz Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday! :happy birthday: 
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ebee-the-artist Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :3 <3
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Saitonart Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018  Professional General Artist
happy birthday 
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ebee-the-artist Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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masonicon Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2018  Student General Artist
how's my request?
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hi want to be friends
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ebee-the-artist Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure thing! :)
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enkrat Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Živjo Erin!! Najlepša hvala kind friend for fav!!:wave::hug:
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