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Model: Rebecca Lawrence

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:icontriplemoonphoto:
I really like your B&W work and this is also a great one. Lighting is great – no significant harsh shadows to speak of that distract from the images intent. At first I wasn’t sure about the vertical lines on the wall, but after taking a moment, I decided that the perspective drew my eyes right into the model (gorgeous model by the way). The lines on the floor also draw the viewer in. The only thing I might suggest is to crop out the door molding to the left, although it could be considered framing – I thought it slightly distracting. All in all a great high key black and white art nude. Thanks for sharing!
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KarelKubin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2019
Excellent work
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:iconpurple66692:
purple66692 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
Great photo❕
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:iconmoonray1033:
MoonRay1033 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
What beauty!
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:iconrayroad-crossing:
Rayroad-Crossing Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I like when a woman sits, her Budah tummy looks so cute.
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Arid-Eauprofonde Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Stunning shot.
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rhett98 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011
Great image!

I just had a shoot with Rebecca on Thursday June 9.

She is a wonderful model and a fantastic person.

On MM and photodom.com I go by the name Carney Malone.
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:iconsemi234:
semi234 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
I like how you were able to capture the sense of space here.
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:iconbshh:
bshh Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
Really nice :-):-)
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:iconjochanaan:
jochanaan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
Lovely enigmatic face. And yes, there are lots of good details. 8-)

Off-topic comment: I'm pleased to see another sign of "the bush's return." :rose:
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:iconj-mobius:
J-Mobius Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
Gorgeous.
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:iconpaloulou:
paloulou Featured By Owner May 7, 2010
This is a very beautiful photo. But is it supposed to show her mood?
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:iconphydeau:
phydeau Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful. I love the way all the lines lead to her.
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:icontriplemoonphoto:
TriplemoonPhoto Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Great image - critique on its way!
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:iconlexxii:
lexxii Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Simple but nice photo of Rebecca with good lighting on her in a nice pose
:)
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:iconelumbis:
Elumbis Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hmmm, I'm not sure why this photo does so little for me. I think it somehow feels flat even with all those vertical and diagonal lines. I believe more contrast is needed to make it pop. And her skin sort of blends in with the background. I'm curious on what it looks like in color...
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:icone-string:
e-string Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
It's intentionally high-key.

It doesn't come in colour, it's b&w film.
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iluvkiss73 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
i love this picture...i really like the way her toes look...and she is beautiful.
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:icone-string:
e-string Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
I'm glad you noticed the toes. ;) That's one reason I like this so much - subtlety! :heart:
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