I LOVE ALL OF THIS!
your seriously failing at the plot
i actually think the little black ghostly thing is cute =w=
this is getting really cool, like very much everything, the art looks easy but its neat at the same time, the storyboard looks very well organized, and as for how much score ill give out a 4 star is what i think will go good
dang... they probably shoulda thought this through, huh?
it turns out attacking somebody in the one way that gives them near omnipotent power and control isn't such a good idea, who'd have thunk it?