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PixelGirl.01 by DukeStewart PixelGirl.01 by DukeStewart
Okay, to start off, yes! right? a comic? I'm sorry for not uploading and all, hopefully I'll get to upload more for this series in the very near future. I've been preoccupied with the usual school, work and a big secret project that I may tell you all about someday.

For now, this is the beginning of a new series. It's called PixelGirl and it's about a girl of the same name who is the living embodiment of a video game.

Do tell me your honest opinions, I'm a glutton for feedback.

Next one should show up soon.

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:icondarklord96:
Let me start off by saying that I'm a huge fan of webcomics. Seeing things like this cropping up on DeviantArt is awesome.

The artwork in this comic is clean and detailed, certainly among the top of what I have come to expect from webcomics that update somewhat regularly. Though I can't tell what kind of story it is likely to be(i.e. drama, slice of life, satire, etc.) from the two pages you have posted, the overall premise seems like something that I would be interested in reading.

The primary complaint or issue I have is that it's not really clear why the girl loses all three of her lives just from being kicked with a soccer ball. It's understandable for the first life to be lost, but less clear as to why the other two are lost as well. But that's my only complaint, I look forward to seeing more of this in the future!
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Miko-The-Fox Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconderekandbladian: WHY?! WHY DOES BLADIAN NOT DIE FROM BA- oh ya, spikes pop balls and he has a whole bunch'a them.
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DerekAndBladian Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Yep
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:iconmiko-the-fox:
Miko-The-Fox Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dammit.
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:iconderekandbladian:
DerekAndBladian Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
yep
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:iconmiko-the-fox:
Miko-The-Fox Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu[p
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:iconderekandbladian:
DerekAndBladian Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
yup
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:iconleafsoto:
LeafSoto Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so funny! XD times infinity
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NeoniZigzagoon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD me firsttttttttttttttttttttt wat
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niko3240 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wait hold on what are thoses blury thing and why are they blury
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nabbers34 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*points at black guy* MURDER!!!!!!
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Demialc-neeb-sah-em Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013

Okay, that hit must have been brutal.

1 hit kills I've heard off, but an attack that does so much damage it kills you TWICE? That's pretty hardcore.

 

 

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PsydoomX Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015   Digital Artist
i think she already lost one
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:iconbrightpaw32:
Brightpaw32 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(First chapter: Main character dies) ....... I love it already! (Thumbs up) But man, she's a weak video game character. Oh well. Hope to see more later!
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:iconsisthra:
Sisthra Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
That's an awesome idea! Can't wait to see more :3
I like the pixels on her shoes and hands.
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:iconezrudine:
Ezrudine Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh~ I like it! Unique Idea! > 7 <)/
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:iconspeciesunkn0wn:
Speciesunkn0wn Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
PFFFF! RESPAWNING NEXT!
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:icontheflorifant:
TheFlorifant Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's the idea I have been playing with for a while now. I hope it's gonna be as good if I think it's gonna be.
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kyuubilover27 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Lol ok I'm going to enjoy this.
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:iconloofytehfox:
loofytehfox Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is going to be amazing
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:iconland-shark17:
Land-Shark17 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it already. The artwork's awesome and the timing is great for getting the joke through. And a series set around the living embodiment of a video game sounds pretty kickass to me.

All-in-all: More. Now.
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ocarinageek Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In the time you've been gone, you've improved. There's a lot more detail, both minor and major. Pixel filly seems like a funny character, very original. Love the demon hoof coming out of nowhere.

Welcome back!
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:iconvethaak:
vethaak Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dear lord


I AM GOING TO LOVE THIS.
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:iconjustfox13:
JustFox13 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist

Jesus Christ I'd never be able to look at life the same way again if this happened to me o_o

 

But I want more of this comic.

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PapopaQ Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
Gimme more!
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:iconswirledthoughts:
SwirledThoughts Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is absolutely amazing
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ShadowtheCartoonist Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
THAT'S HILARIOUS
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:iconscorpio1996:
Scorpio1996 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL, I wanna see more of this! XD

"I think I killed a person." LOL
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ShadowCatGamer Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Her design is very cute, the pixels kinda look a little off though, like your blurring something inappropriate. I'm sure this can be fixed by adding a little more shades of blue to them. This is a small nit-pick though, so don't get discouraged, this is still very fun.
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Tim15 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Shes kinda cute.
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:iconburningarrows:
BurningArrows Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Why does that red hand shooting out of the ground remind me of Eversion...
(Don't download it.  It plays mind tricks on you.)
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:iconj2miner:
j2miner Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
So she was draged down to the depths of internet hell? 
internet hell= 4chan
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:iconchaogirl200:
Chaogirl200 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Lets not put her there, bad things happen, very bad things with tentacles and the like.
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johnnywhoa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was wondering what was going on here. I figured you were basing it on a game character or something I didn't recognize. I still got the joke and laughed out loud, though.

PixelGirl, huh? I'm interested. I always liked "video game/cartoon character meets real life" stuff. I'll be keeping an eye on it! Good luck :D
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Rune-Plushheart Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
That is so awesome! I can't wait for more!
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vader3321 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh your god. I love it already. Going to be great to watch this comic progress. Please don't drop it.

Oh, and welcome back~
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NoLimit5 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
In terms of concept, I think it's brilliant and hilarious. I'm curious what kind of video game genres/tropes that you can make fun of with this series.
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:iconlegendlord:
LegendLord Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
I like this series already!
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:iconmajmu:
majmu Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
I like her character design! With those pixels it's quite unique and you're not afraid of using something as normal as brown as her hair color, which is very nice.

What comes to the series itself, it's hard to say anything other than it has great potential. Your series have been funny and imaginative so far so I don't think this one is gonna be anything inferior compared to the others.

Great to have some of your art in my inbox :heart: Makes my day C:
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RaineArtz Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
She must have low defence
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SamGorsuch Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha this is awesome xD
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FloraRedwood Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
sounds fun! :) I like the mix of reality and gaming world.

Your present is still by my desk....

I know you can't currently reply to any comments because of your computer spazzing, but take care, and see you this weekend!
Hi! Boing! Boing! :happybounce: Hmm. Evil plotting in progress. Sherlock Holmes w00t! Ohm... Ohm...
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Thehoodedsaviour Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A great way to start off a new comic.

It's an interesting idea to have her be the living embodiment of a video game, and if these end up being based off of your real life events like you probably mentioned, it'll be worth the wait to see where this ends up.

But please, I beseech you, Don't give us another Heart aching ending.

Other than that, I give you top praises, very well done.
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Jacob3908 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
It's awesome XD

Glad you're back at it^^
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:iconcorrupted-dawn:
Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
BUT. It looks pretty. Nice proportions with clean line art and colouring - as always - but..
she doesnt have ankles?
Was she playing a game within a game?
Is this in Brazil?
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:iconcorrupted-dawn:
Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
And bro that life system is whack.
You know its true!!!
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geibenchan Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm a little confused by the giant (demonic in appearance) hand, (is it a video game reference or just a quick plot device to show she's not really dying but being dragged to hell?) but otherwise it seems like a good series and i can't wait to see what her deal is.
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Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
And who stands in the middle of a field playing on their psp??!!
When are you next on holiday by the way?
And yes. This is the best way to ask.
Because. Corey doesnt seem to think texting me is worth the money.
Or he's getting back at me for not finding out the brand of those noodles for him..
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Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Oh. Footpath. I take it all back. 
Did the clouds move up slightly? 
After the fourth panel?
Or was that supposed to happen?
Because I dont think they move any more.
Theres just that one cloud.
Perfectly balanced on the tree bottom right.
So pretty
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:iconcorrupted-dawn:
Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
More like centre right. oops.
Hi Corey!
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:iconcorrupted-dawn:
Corrupted-Dawn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
And the daemons wrist is really thin for such a FAT hand.
Looks like he'd be quite a skinny finnian.
And was that one missing red pixel in the "M" really necessary? 
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