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Comic Book Book 60 by DukeStewart Comic Book Book 60 by DukeStewart
I'm actually going to request a critique on this one because it seems to have turned out a little better than usual, ey.

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:iconchronogirl08:
Well I think it looks awesome as is but if you really want some criticism. . .

- Great Floating Eyes and Eyebrows 'Chibi! Floating eyes and eyebrows are my life long nemesis in the world of art and you have them in the second and last panels. Hair goes over eyebrows and eyes, not under them. (In the last panel, it's the outline of the eye that's floating over the hair.)

- His eye in the last panel is missing shadows where the hair drapes over them. You have shadows on the skin above and below the eye but you forgot the eye itself unless of course you intended him to have glowing eyes.

- The nose in the second panel looks funny. In my opinion, instead of lines, you should have added a small, soft shadow like you did in the corner of the mouth.

- The shadow on his spine is a little too strong and deep, it looks more like a seam being opened rather than a spine groove.

Except for those, it's really great.
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:iconkaze-chan187:
Well...

I love your artwork, really. Since I read your minecraft comic where there's the guy who looks like a Creeper I've got atonished, sinceerly.

I think you do have a really clear idea of what you want to express in your art work so... Well, your work is super original. And in my opininon, from the ones I've seen, it's the one that has specially captured my attention. In what refers to technique... I really like your drawing style, but... I request you to get your panels a little ordered.

I think that's it, keep it up and really good luck!
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LeafSoto Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happened to me before...many times
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SasukeUchihaFan55 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I feel ya, this happens to me all the time
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mystery942 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
happens to me all the time then im bouncing around like an idiot to keep the blood flowing
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:iconnanoxfate:
NanoXfatE Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
I'm laughing more than I should be...

But I don't care xDD
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TFMaster792 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
After reading all 60 in one day, i can conclude that your life is nuts, man.
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SquirrelWarlord Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So i'm not the only one who read them in one day...
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Leviathantamer Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
I'm doing it too!
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Reo-chan61 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
I have to say that I absolutely love CBB. (My favourite characters being Corey and Matthew :3)
I really hope you keep cotinuing these into the future! :)
Just a curious comment, how long does it take you to every comic roughly?
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
Aboooooooot.... 4 to 6 hours-ish
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:iconreo-chan61:
Reo-chan61 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Ok, thank you. I really was just curious...
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:iconkirstinlove:
KirstinLove Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that feeling bro
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:iconnsm-superherofan:
NSM-superherofan Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Ghost: hey Danny phantom does that
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crazywolfperson Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad it'll be a while before i have to go through that stuff
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:iconjdr3000:
JDR3000 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
Haha i clicked away before my soul was taken. Eat that Death!
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:iconcrazywolfperson:
crazywolfperson Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconulawan5:
ulawan5 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I hate when that happens! XD
and it really does look great!
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Shadowwolf1314 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
<time to interject an awkward comment>

MMMMMM DAT BACK
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:iconelf-healer:
Elf-healer Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Gosh, this is so true D: The thing is, the bag wasn't even at the bottom of his/your jacket so I don't even know how it got under the jacket to lift it up in the first place... Oh well xD
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YAY18 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
At least your friends don't CONSTANTLY run their finger down your spine when they know its a hot-spot >_<
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SpargusCityAngel Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Hahaha! I know how you feel. Especially if I'm bending down and my shirt goes up. COOOOOLLLLLDDD!
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moomoos1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
i hate when that happens.
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:iconroxj:
Roxj Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
HAPPENDS
EVERY
TIME!
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:iconet7-13artstudio:
ET7-13ArtStudio Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
why is it always warm here? *lives in Arizona*
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TommiSawyer Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is why i will eternally use a backpack.
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TannerJack Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
ahhhahah
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Darkcat13 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
hahahaha
hilarious xD
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chronogirl08 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, never happened to me but funny as hell.

If your bag hurt's your shoulder IRL, try wearing across your chest instead of your shoulder. The bag should be resting on the hip opposite the shoulder holding the strap, that way all the weight is carried across your back and chest.
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Forgotenandlost Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist
lol that has happened to me
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cjar344 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Oh God...this also works for when sleeping during Winter, and you just got warm, and then the blanket moves and the blast of cold air comes in.
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sakido2412 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice.
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Discord-Drocsid Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
:icontruestoryplz:
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ForeverMittens Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate it when that happens.
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AccidentalChild Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That happens to me all the time! Good to know that I'm not alone in this horrible time of cold.
BTW I had noticed an improvement... not sure what it is exactly though...
GOOD JOB!
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wikikid Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:rofl:
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USOtaku013666 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I hate when that happens XD
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NairSame13 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I hate when that happens especialy where I live in the winter time. Minnesota weather in the wintertime is brutal. >~<
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DeadloveCalling Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha I know exactly how that feels. That always happened when I was in school :P
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