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Comic Book Book 47 - The Book by DukeStewart Comic Book Book 47 - The Book by DukeStewart
Okay, so this isn't all of it. There's some extra stuff from the book that I'll upload another day. In the meantime, try to...appreciate this one. It sucked my social life for all it was worth you know.

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Alright, this critique will be on both parts one and two.

Part one: I like the flow of the whole scenario, and I like seeing how your expressions have developed, along with shadow and shade work, it's very good. That, and the fact that your sense of humor is fantastic, random, and hilariously surprising: this is a good thing.

Part two: I love all the the chaos in the beginning, same praise for expression and shadow, but around the middle bit I felt that the action sequences (the whole sonic boom yell and then confronting Corey bit) were getting a bit crammed, too fast-paced, but that may just be me.
I'm wondering if maybe you could've used more of that white space, but I'm appreciating the effects you have going on here.

On another note: adorable puppy.

Okay, had my say. Good stuff!
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:iconrosabelle101:
Rosabelle101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Student Artist
What kind of dog is it?
What's its name?
Did it actually bite you?
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
yup thats his dog
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:iconminecrafroger:
minecrafroger Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOL
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:iconnatade13:
Natade13 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The last panel. Murderous dog :iconlaughplz:
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:iconfiredragoness357:
firedragoness357 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
It bites you!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:icon02abby02:
02abby02 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Corey: Yep
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:iconshadowcatgamer:
ShadowCatGamer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you use to make these comics?
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Photoshop. What do you use?
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:iconshadowcatgamer:
ShadowCatGamer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A scanner and Corel Painter.
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Good show. :iconbwavoplz:
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:iconshadowcatgamer:
ShadowCatGamer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la: Thank You!
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Earthstripe09 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww! So cute! I love that dog, and ti reminds me of the cat from Azumanga Diaoh. Mostly just for biting hands.
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Mizushima01 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
That cat HATED Sakaki.
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:iconchibikatniss:
chibikatniss Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
PUPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconizzyizz303:
izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I would react like Corey....
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:iconfearthedark123:
fearthedark123 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
panel one:flying puppy
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Okamimusume Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't help but laugh every time I read this! Especially the first three panels! Pure randomness and mayhem, and Corey is just standing there, not even looking up! That is his character, after all!=P
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:iconnsm-superherofan:
NSM-superherofan Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Ghost: *chuckle* got bit

goggles is so cool. favorite character. :D
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:iconthekitty-o-kat:
TheKitty-O-Kat Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lol did they srsly expect Corey to answer them??
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:icontannerjack:
TannerJack Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
lol
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:icontheghosty:
TheGhosty Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Yeah this is badass >:D
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:iconroseanderson1000:
RoseAnderson1000 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student General Artist
[link]

They already knew he had a dog ...
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Naaaaaw...


That dog's dead.
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
my eyes hurt from watching this all two hours straight without blinking can you make Corey do sign language that would be cool!
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:iconbaltowolf13:
baltowolf13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist
lol
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:iconvulasaur:
Vulasaur Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
He got that beard.
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:icondioxim:
Dioxim Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
love the last panels art! and the long strip! like vgcats
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:iconelf-healer:
Elf-healer Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
No words can express how awesome this comic is. And that puppy still is super cute. Even though it bit you xDDD

I heart me your comics xD
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:iconrizathepenguin:
Rizathepenguin Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I love! I missed your comics... =)
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:iconpurpleground02:
Purpleground02 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol WIN for the ending!
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:iconissun:
issun Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
OMFG I love panel ten.
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:iconvitanilover:
VitaniLover Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
love stinks!!!!!!!!!!!1 ooo yeaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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:iconorangepumpkins:
orangepumpkins Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
unexpected. love :)
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manana12321 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
That was unexpected XD
I loved it !
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:iconkatana001:
Katana001 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahaha! i love your sig! >w<
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:iconstrawberry-girl-hero:
strawberry-girl-hero Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol that was awesome! i liked this!
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GazellaMech Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Geez, took you long enough, you bastard.
Good to see the new material =) will this be in the published book? I haven't gotten my hands on it yet.
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Lost-Tresure Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
I love this. It was so worth the wait for an update. Feel sorry for Corey though, at least it's understandeble that he didn't say or do anything.
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Infernal-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
Good work man. We should celebrate next time I come over.
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
Careful. That sounded like a compliment there.
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:icondemijecht:
demiJecht Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Geeze Treble with friends like yours, I'd hate to see your enemies
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:iconsoujaurl:
Soujaurl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The dog reminds me of Reptar in the very last panel, I don't know why...
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:iconko-ko-romi:
Ko-Ko-ROMI Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
I do believe you've reached a sonic corey-boom............o 7 o
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:icondatanimegeek26:
DatAnimeGeek26 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How'd Matthew get his glasses back after you knee'd him in the face...
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:icondashdotdotdash:
DashDotDotDash Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Reparo. That's how.
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:iconstarcrest180:
starcrest180 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
pfft~ of course in the end the dog bites you :lmao:
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:iconbobbittthehobbit:
BobbittTheHobbit Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Huzzah! "By the end of today" came!
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:iconkindestdemonotaku:
KindestdemonOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
=w= This made my fan girl moment of Corey sky rocket <3 ohhhh so awesome -Snuggle this forever-
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EmotWolf Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
Me too!!! :D
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:iconkindestdemonotaku:
KindestdemonOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
X3 Yay the army of Fan girls for Corey all of them :3
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