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BarEnder by DukeStewart BarEnder by DukeStewart
Lines by Corey :iconinfernal-dusk:

About a bartender that goes about ending bars.
Ask Corey about the full story if you like, I can't be bothered...

Corey brought this lineart over and I really wanted to colour it.
It's a bit cartoonier than he's used to, I dunno...

I'm gonna request a critique for this one. Tell me what the lines are like for corey's sake, and what the colours are like for mine.
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OperaHouseGhost Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
this is really good colouring youv done, i loved the lineart already but now youv made it come to life (so to speak) ~~~!!!!

i love the eyes too and i just love all of your colouring on this!! its ace!
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AlchemistMayCry Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perspective issues aside, I really like this picture. It's got good coloring/shading, and style. Doing more in this style would be cool.
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Suka-chan13 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Artist
The perspective is a little odd around the head in prapotion to the body and the broken bottle, but I'm still not too good with my own pespective so it really dosen't matter. On the other hand the perspective on the rest of the body looks great.
The shading on the eyes however dosen't seem like your usual styl, were you trying something new? It dosen't look baad or anything it just dose'nt look like what you usually do
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011
hm. I guess it is a bit different. Didn't really notice :D'
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Suka-chan13 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Student Artist
Well, like I said. Its not a bad change. And it looks only slightly diferent from how you useualy shade them. But it may just be me. I notice the oddest things mabout peoples art
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cherrystar318 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011
Oh.. i thought this wasn't your usual cartoons

its turns out it wasn't XD
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Maxfield-Elite Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
I really like how the perspective gives it a really dynamic feel, and the colors add a lot of life to it, too.

But now I can't stop thinking about Ender's Game.
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NoLimit5 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
For the lines, I think it has a really clever style to it that I can't even criticize the disproportions. The colors also work well, but I'm wondering why he has two shadows. @_@
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rainbowcrane Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
a lot of things have two shadows IRL, it just means there are two different light sources casting two different shadows.
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NoLimit5 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
I know that, but the picture itself doesn't really indicate there's two different light sources.
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rainbowcrane Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
hmm, i see your point.
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ZeimiTakahashi Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
I think the shading is done really well and stuff
And the lineart is really neat hhfhhfdaskl


I can't really say much else but this picture is really cool. :0
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SnowLullaby Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
Very very nice lines! I like the perspective too. The overall drawing caught my attention in the devwatch straight away.
Lovely colouring too :). Especially I like the clothing folds etc., I personally never have the patience to do those properly. I like the colour scheme as well.
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Itachi4ever997 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
Oh my, he's adoreable!
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OceanBlueMockingbird Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011   Traditional Artist
It´s really cool, but it might´ve looked better if you made the closest eye a just a bit smaller.
Really, I shouldn´t complain since I can´t make anything better! It´s really good!:D:D
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