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A Very Sucky Attempt. by DukeStewart A Very Sucky Attempt. by DukeStewart
Sorry folks, this isn't meant to be a funny photoshop comic. like the good kind...just an attempt to see how i'd do at doing a manga.

actually, you know what? I really do want to know. Give me feedback PAH-LEASE. god knows, I could use some.
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RoxasTheLucario Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Your awesome enough to make it, just do a little better to reach the king ranks.
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faisangirl Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
and yet again while randomly searching devient art i come across some amazing art. you people inspire me. don't doubt yourself!
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bethanyjc Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
amazing i cant even do anything close to that:)
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Onslaught14 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student General Artist
CURAGA! there now ur leg flesh has ceized melting. Not smart to knee in fire.
and its awesome sauce, better then mah comic(s).
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
I did attempt this like half a year ago...might be time to try again.
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Onslaught14 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student General Artist
no take ur time, as a lazy person, I personally accept forgetfulness.
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StrawberryJimJam Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student Filmographer
whats wrong with it? i looks good to me
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Isciixi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Now I'd like to say that I don't know the first thing about designing a manga, but you could experiment with different patterns/textures as another way of colouring or portraying the "mood" etc.
A good example of this is Kelinor's :iconkelinor: "Gifted" series. [link]

But as it is now, it looks awesome :) I like how you've used a slanted panel in the first row. Panel #5 also looks great, I think it's my favourite panel :)
Nice work :D
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Jesus, I forgot about this.

Hey, thanks! I always love constructive criticism:)
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Isciixi Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
Haha :)

You're very welcome! ^-^
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YamamotoMisuko Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
awesome
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
thanks
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YamamotoMisuko Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
your very good compared to me
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
:3 thanks
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YamamotoMisuko Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009
*sobs in a emo corner*
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ET7-13ArtStudio Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
okay so far your manga is alot better than my manga
i have a large doubt that my comic will ever make it into Shonen Jump or Viz Media
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
work at it
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shiromi-uchiha Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
It looks good overall. Better than what I have the mental capacity for.
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
thanks
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DaAmazingMeepers Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I bet it would be even more awesome with dialogue. Not that it isn't awesome now. It's way past cool!:aww:
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
:3 thanks!
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rainbowcrane Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
*slaps you* so right, this is good.

have you ever thought of changing the width of your line art, like changing thickness of the brush strokes. its harder with fine liner pens but it pritty much the same as how you have done with the changing thickness of the upper eye... lid? well you know what i mean. it can realy bring an extra depth if you use it through out the picture.

although, i generaly dont do that anyway O.O too lazy >w<
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
!_!...as long as it wasn't indya...
i think the idea may have occurred to me at some point, but i went through the entire thing just using a 0.5 pen. i probably should have at least used the 0.3 for the smaller pictures, like the one with the long distance shot in the first panel. my other problem was finding screentone. i had to improvise with photoshop because the internet didn't want to tell me anything.
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rainbowcrane Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
the way you did the tones looks fine, some artists even prefer that to proper screen tones. nice bro! XD
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
:aww: thanks
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FallenAngelKiba Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
really good for a first attempt at manga a whole lot better than mine just needs words XD
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thanks
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Akatsuki-Kirai101 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Looks good to me :P
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thanks
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Akatsuki-Kirai101 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
No prob
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ET7-13ArtStudio Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
manga is good for anyone who can draw because its drawn from right to left and all they need is characters and a background
oh and i am going to be submiting a new Naruto series about my character Wolf so wish me luck with drawing the rest of the comic and getting it submitted

check my drawings out : wolfthe19tailedwolf
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
good luck
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ET7-13ArtStudio Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thnx
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Millistaza13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student General Artist
Well, I'm going to say that this is much, much better than I could ever do... :clap: :#1:
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thanks^^
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Millistaza13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student General Artist
^^
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nekoxriku2008 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
that looks really good~ its looks really good, and i really think you'd make a good manga artist~
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thanks^^
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nekoxriku2008 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome, i hope you draw more stuff like this~ like if you really start a manga series, i'll definitely would read it...
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
:3
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nekoxriku2008 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
^^ plus i loved the way you shade, it kinda does look like it was a manga...
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:icondukestewart:
DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
yeah, well i have photoshop to thank for that...
screentone is expensive ya know?
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:iconnekoxriku2008:
nekoxriku2008 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
yea, it is but since i don't have photoshop any more i can't do ether..
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ZeimiTakahashi Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
You did a really good job on the shading...
and uh....
I don't know what else to critique. o_o
Everything is so well done for your first try. D:
Well I can at least say that you did a awsome job :>
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
^^thanks
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ZantMarx Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AHAHAHA I read sucky as stick and i was expecting a whole different kind of picture.

this is so good i would love to see it in colour
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
don't expect to...but thanks
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ZantMarx Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah i thought youd say that. ah well- worth a shot
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spongedav Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
i say you'd do just about epicly awesome!
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DukeStewart Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thanks
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